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Reviews for: My Brother The Fault Is Mine
WhimsicalShmoo
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
Cute :3 I love it...beautifully done.
astella704
2008-01-07 . chapter 1
So cute! i like the slight drama in this like where theyre both just too stubborn to make a move lol great job!!
lightslaststand
2007-09-30 . chapter 1
yeaah i liked this xD
soo cute
ELRICEST ! yeah!
xxfinch
Sora Blade707
2007-03-14 . chapter 1
Aw, very sweet and angsty. Gotta love angst. XD Anyway, no problem for no lemon, the two making-out is just as hot. -drools-

Al: Ew! Niisan! Sora's doing it again!

-singsong voice- He can't hear you! :3

Al: What'd you do to Niisan?

Uh...nothing?

-in Sora's closet, a muffled cry of indignaty is heard from outside the door- -Sora and Al sweatdrop-

Al: ...-tries to wrench open the closet door-

Ah...anyway, hope you continue the good work. -runs away as Ed chases Sora-
Innocent Slayer
2007-01-29 . chapter 1
Long Reviewer coming through. Clear the way people

This made no sense seeing as ive never seen the anime but with the bait of spoilers who could resist ^^;? *looks to half finished math work* Well it's only Standard form!

Was good (In crackle just for You: Wa-a-as-ss G-o-o-o-d) Incest is god and well I can't actually boast *sweatdrop*

You Elricest addicted Buddy of mine! You need to get a hobbie. Remember this saying:"When a Cartoon Character looks hot you know your desperate" Ok so maybe someone said that to me over my Sasuke desktop but still *sweatdrops again*

Ok im officailly bored and I ned to do my homework. Damn you Leila Logan and your fics. And I do not read to fast *pouts* Speed reading is my thing! And well i cant actually say that much more so to copy dodo...

BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT!

Good enough, ne?
Britt
Soichiro
2007-01-25 . chapter 1
Was the title from the song "brothers"? Anyways it was really good!! Ed is 2 stubborn! Good ending, just like Ed! ^^
m.t.dog
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
Oh that was so cute!! ^_^ It was a great way to end it, and I think that a lemon would've ruined the fluffiness at the end. It was excellently written, and I Really enjoyed it! PLEASE write more, k? Thanks! ^_^
Karai
2007-01-21 . chapter 1
*claps* this is really good ^^. Really... there is however one thing, for asfar I know, this plays at the end 40's, they didn't have television back then *sweat drop*
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