 WhimsicalShmoo 2008-12-21 . chapter 1Cute :3 I love it...beautifully done. |
 astella704 2008-01-07 . chapter 1So cute! i like the slight drama in this like where theyre both just too stubborn to make a move lol great job!! |
 lightslaststand 2007-09-30 . chapter 1yeaah i liked this xD
soo cute
ELRICEST ! yeah!
xxfinch |
 Sora Blade707 2007-03-14 . chapter 1Aw, very sweet and angsty. Gotta love angst. XD Anyway, no problem for no lemon, the two making-out is just as hot. -drools-
Al: Ew! Niisan! Sora's doing it again!
-singsong voice- He can't hear you! :3
Al: What'd you do to Niisan?
Uh...nothing?
-in Sora's closet, a muffled cry of indignaty is heard from outside the door- -Sora and Al sweatdrop-
Al: ...-tries to wrench open the closet door-
Ah...anyway, hope you continue the good work. -runs away as Ed chases Sora- |
 Innocent Slayer 2007-01-29 . chapter 1Long Reviewer coming through. Clear the way people
This made no sense seeing as ive never seen the anime but with the bait of spoilers who could resist ^^;? *looks to half finished math work* Well it's only Standard form!
Was good (In crackle just for You: Wa-a-as-ss G-o-o-o-d) Incest is god and well I can't actually boast *sweatdrop*
You Elricest addicted Buddy of mine! You need to get a hobbie. Remember this saying:"When a Cartoon Character looks hot you know your desperate" Ok so maybe someone said that to me over my Sasuke desktop but still *sweatdrops again*
Ok im officailly bored and I ned to do my homework. Damn you Leila Logan and your fics. And I do not read to fast *pouts* Speed reading is my thing! And well i cant actually say that much more so to copy dodo...
BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT!
Good enough, ne?
Britt |
 Soichiro 2007-01-25 . chapter 1 Was the title from the song "brothers"? Anyways it was really good!! Ed is 2 stubborn! Good ending, just like Ed! ^^ |
 m.t.dog 2007-01-22 . chapter 1Oh that was so cute!! ^_^ It was a great way to end it, and I think that a lemon would've ruined the fluffiness at the end. It was excellently written, and I Really enjoyed it! PLEASE write more, k? Thanks! ^_^ |
 Karai 2007-01-21 . chapter 1*claps* this is really good ^^. Really... there is however one thing, for asfar I know, this plays at the end 40's, they didn't have television back then *sweat drop* |