i like it

wow, this was so emtional i felt my heart sink as i read it0.0

i knew when i finished readng the Song of the Lioness Quartet that Jonathan probably still loved Allana but i never thought of it so deeply. amazing!

LOVE IT!I AM GOING TO READ THE SEQUEL NOW!

You're kind of redundant:

"...the best decision I’ve made as king, both for me and for my country.

But a tiny portion of my brain screams that it is not the best decision for me, yet it may be for my country. I had to sacrifice a bit of my welfare for that of my country, or a bit of my country for my own. As king, the country has to come first..."

How many times did you say "my country" or the word "country" in general?

Answer: A lot

I always imagined that's what each of them are really thinking and now that you've written it and I'm about to go on my A/J rants I can always look back at this to prevent me from annoying the heck out of my friends(one of which is an A/G fan, not that I have anything against A/G or J/T I just like A/J more!LOL!).Keep up the good work!

Kinda sad! Love is interesting- huh?

Aww - beautifully written - sob!

That's so sad. Jon is such a deep person, you have an amazing knack for characterising him.

You make Alanna seem so evil. Shame on you. He loved Thayet, and she no longer loved him. One the other hand it was good writng. I give it a B. good and bad. Why don't you do a stroy where Alanna marries Jon? It would be a good story.

Aw. that is so sad. sniff. i think i'm going to cry. sniff sniff. poor Jon. the poor guy, aw he's so cute! sniff.i love him so much! (tear slide down cheek) curse than wicked Alanna!

Aw...*tear* That's sad. I wish Jon had realized he loved her EARLIER...

Awh this was so sad, i understand why Alanna ended up with George in the books but i still prefer Jon...

*so sad...still i don't get why even though i read these stories i can't move on from A/J to a mild A/G