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Faith Kendall 2008-04-26 ch 2,	abuseI love your style of writing. The power in this short chapter was amazing; I actually found it quite hauntingly beautiful. I will definately be reading on.
Liz 2008-01-18 ch 27, anon.	abusesniff Why does all your stuff make me weepy? Love it, love it, love it.
Amousca 2007-03-06 ch 27,	abuseWow, this was some intense piece of writing. I really liked the originality of Brin's constant turn one way and the other. I really wasn't sure what she'd do in the end and I'm glad it wasn't any worse. She did the right thing in the end and that sets my mind at ease (yes, yes, I'm a sucker for good endings)... Excellent story.
Dartle 2007-02-23 ch 27,	abuseBeautiful.
Jazhara7 2007-02-23 ch 27,	abuseSo sad! So SAD! cries Please tell me this is not the end. I know there's not always a happy end (not only because nothing ends, but that's something entirely different), but please, please tell me this not the end. - :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
Aeryn Phoenix 2007-02-23 ch 27,	abuseThis was a very heartwrenching take on the Valen romance. (Just as a side note, I HATED that you could have the love triangle thing between Valen and the sleeping man with a female PC - it was stupid and totally ruined the end of the game for me.) The only problem I saw I already metioned (defining past from present), and besides a very few spelling mistakes, it was an excellent read. Oh, I did notice that at the end of chapter 7 you said "The Knower of Names" and I think it should have been the "Knower of Places" - it threw me off for a moment. You really did an excellent job with this. If someone were to simply skim the story, they might find your PC a bit like someone with a multiple personality disorder, but anyone who reads the story thoroughly will see that she makes perfect sense. I know a lot of women in real life who are like Brin, too burdened by their own guilt to accept what is freely given. I think it was very well done, and it was certainly a unique undertaking since I've never read anything quite like it. Excellent work, and I hope to see more stories from you in the future! :)
Aeryn Phoenix 2007-02-23 ch 7,	abuseOkay, I'm not done reading yet, but I want to mention this before I forget. The only problem I'm having is not knowing where the transitions are between memories and the present. You might want to just separate them by an extra line or a dash or put them in italics or something because several times I had to go "Oh, wait" and go back to read something over until I could catch where the transition was. But that's my only trip up so far...now I'll keep reading...
AceOfDaimonds 2007-02-21 ch 27,	abuseNO! WHY?! WHY?! Aargh! Is this the end? PLEASE say it isn't...sob Poor, poor Valen...and Brin! Aw...I'm almost crying...
Dartle 2007-02-20 ch 23,	abuseI'm really enjoying this story, it's been wonderfully dramatic, descriptive and angst-y right from the start. Looking forward to what happens next!
ArianaKir 2007-02-20 ch 23,	abuseI love this story. Is it because it's HOTU? I don't know, but you've done a wonderful job adding depth to your characters, and kept enough mystery to keep one's interest. Keep it up!
AceOfDaimonds 2007-02-18 ch 20,	abuseAw...that's so sad. The poor angel...this story has got me hooked, I'm dying to see what happens next...
Jazhara7 2007-02-17 ch 20,	abuseSo sad... I remember standing there, reloading multiple times to make sure I didn't get my character as the true love of the Sleeper, and that he got someone who was still alive. The poor Angel... - :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
Cait 2007-02-16 ch 19, anon.	abuseI like how you didn't give away the Knower of Names answers, now I'll just have to wait and see.
Rhyagelle 2007-02-14 ch 19, anon.	abuseI have to say that this is definitely one of the best fics I've read in a long time. Other than a few grammatical errors and typos, I simply couldn't find anything to fault. Your writing style is great, it really sucks the reader in. When I found this story, I read it from start to finish in one sitting because I just had to know what happened. :) I even neglected my homework to finish it. ;p Definitely keep up the good work.
Avariel600 2007-02-13 ch 19,	abuseI wish you could have seen the happy dance I did when the Chapter 18 alert dropped into my inbox! squee! I'm glad Valen finally got a little love :P Rowr! Nicely done, especially on how, in the beginning in Cania, she's very cold and withdrawn, and the environment around them reflects that coldness (all your imagery in the beginning was great!) And now that's she's warming up a bit, you're using a lot of fire/heat imagery (the fire they sleep by, melting the ice aronud the Knower, fighting Grimnash't) Masterfully worked :)

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