Interesting. But you forgot Kaidoh! How could you?

It has a lot of potential too. And it's so like Fuji to sneak into hell.

Hahah, that sounds fun. (And I agree with Momo, reincarnation sounds like more fun.)

This is a great story. No major spelling/grammer/punctuation errors.
I can just imagine Fuji sneaking into Hell out of curiousity and Ryoma challenging God to a tennis match.
Keep Writing!
If all your stories are this good, it would be a waste to stop.

I like it. It was a good idea to write about the regulars in afterlife. They are still the same after death. Interesting and creative!

cool fuji snuck into hell.so the devil could'nt even keep up with him.

Very cool concept, it's different. I love that Fuji snuck into hell...nice.

" I think that Lucifer guy actually sent a memo up asking for him to be removed." - hehe... keep on writing

*cracks up* Yes, it so works. XDXDXD Love the 'Fuji sneaking into hell' part.

(Is there any chance that you'll do something similar with the other teams? ^_^)

Fuji sneaking into hell! That was the best part of the chapter nya! I can just see him wanting to spread the art of tennis (and pranks) wherever he goes! Angel Tezuka..drool.. Pairings.. Tezuka and Fuji OF COURSE! Then Ryoma with Momo, Inui with Kaido and Takashi with Akutsu! Now, it looks like Ryoma is out to the rock the world! Please write more soon!