This is my favorite story of your Samurai Deeper Kyo stories thus far. The characters' portrayals are amazing! They're very true to the original characters. I got goose bumps. The descriptions reeled me in until the finish. I love how you showed Yuya's feelings in Akira's blindness. The anxiety and chemistry between them was palpable!! I never tire of reading this story.

Having just read SDK and surfed for fan fics (hence, I'm new to this fandom, but educated) I'd never thought of this pairing. This fic presents a good argument. I favor Kyo/Yuya. (I'd imagine she was going to tell him not to worry, but that her water dragon laden heart is Kyo's.) I don't really like Tokito much, so no loss there.

For that to be her (maybe) first willing kiss, it was perfectly lovely.

Fantastic I absolutelly loved it...wow

So sweet! :)

my gosh i so love it please,please write more i so want to know what happens next. of all the storys i read this one is the best i love it please write more sorry i keep repiting stuff sorry i hope you can forgive me but please if it's not to mush trouble please write more Oh and sorry for apolizing sorry:(

Oh, how I love the way you write. I've read The Prick of Memory so many, many times.
I just had to read this, when I saw that you had written it, and because it was Akira/Yuya. You are so very good at keeping characters in ... well, character.
Your stories are also organized, which makes it all the more enjoyable to read :D

I really, really hope that you decide to write a full story with Yuya/Akira. Some time. Or just more oneshots XD

Wow! This was really good. I only see kyoxyuya and I like when otheres are paired with her, but this pairing sounds better than kyo and her so good job. ^-^

that was really good! i luv that couple^^

I'm a new fan to SDK! and I already have to say Akira x Yuya
are my favorite couple. I think your story was way cute, though
it's a pity to say there aren't many more like it out there.

aww... this is one of my favorite pairings in this whole series...cute...

I REALLY like this story. Please to a second chpter or a sequel, I want to know what happens to Yuya ans Akira. The'd make such a cute couple! Not that Kyo and Yuya aren't... but I've been trying to write a YuyaxAkira story for ages now, but I can't put a plot together. This story gives me insperation!

WOW! I am at a lose of words! You wrote that extremely well!

its been so long since i reade my fav pairing Akira and Yuya thank you very much for the nice fic i love it very much.

LOVED IT!

More is definately needed!

~M-Angel~

wow. That was just amazing. You are an amazing writer. The deatail in that, was just beautiful.