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| fuu09 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuse*squeals* Loved it! fuu09 |
| the-syco-writer 2007-03-09 ch 1, | abuseIt's good. SHOCKING!! but good. |
| dragon chick aya 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abuseso kawaii ^.^ this is way better than the last One of Those Damn Dreams story ^^ keep it up |
| GaaraEatsTacos 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseNeji x Shikamaru? It' so cute I love it! |
| SilveryKitsune 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abusei would agree there isn't really a strong plot in here, but it has a lot of potential if you maybe added a little more ideas to it =] however, it did entertain me quite greatly, so i like that~ maybe you should take up with adding more chapters, or add a prequel before this or more content, but it's if you want to. keep writing now ^^ |
| psychotic KAT 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI think there could have been a little bit more of a plot here. You're on the border line of PWP, (In which cse you should have some background info) or something that should have more chapters; there's no real emotion or reasoning to this. Still, I thought it was very entertaining. |
| cherrysmex23 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was awesome! |
| BrevityofWit 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cool. You did a good job revising it, I liked it a lot. Keep it up! ^^ |