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Reviews For: One of Those Damn Dreams

fuu09
2007-07-10
ch 1,
abuse*squeals*
Loved it!
fuu09
the-syco-writer
2007-03-09
ch 1,
abuseIt's good. SHOCKING!! but good.
dragon chick aya
2007-01-26
ch 1,
abuseso kawaii ^.^ this is way better than the last One of Those Damn Dreams story ^^ keep it up
GaaraEatsTacos
2007-01-23
ch 1,
abuseNeji x Shikamaru? It' so cute I love it!
SilveryKitsune
2007-01-23
ch 1,
abusei would agree there isn't really a strong plot in here, but it has a lot of potential if you maybe added a little more ideas to it =]
however, it did entertain me quite greatly, so i like that~
maybe you should take up with adding more chapters, or add a prequel before this or more content, but it's if you want to. keep writing now ^^
psychotic KAT
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseI think there could have been a little bit more of a plot here. You're on the border line of PWP, (In which cse you should have some background info) or something that should have more chapters; there's no real emotion or reasoning to this. Still, I thought it was very entertaining.
cherrysmex23
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseAw! That was awesome!
BrevityofWit
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseThat was really cool. You did a good job revising it, I liked it a lot. Keep it up! ^^
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