 Darsh 2/11/07 . chapter 1LOL! You know what? The line that cracked me up the most (and I do mean cracked up, stupid hiccups .) was "Neatly, Akira neatly placed them" I don't know why! I'm so weird...I saw it, I read it twice, I laughed, I laughed, and I laughed... But seriously though, I'm NOT making fun of you (you know I love you too much to do that), I simply love one of those bloopers.
Then, the place that totally beats the previous line is, of course, the ending. It's so hilarious. It's funny I fell for every single of these kind of traps, every single one. Either I'm perverted...or I'm just... good with these devices.
Now, that (the nonsense above) is just my version of a thanks for giving me another VERY entertaining piece to read. It's short, regretably, but that doesn't mean it can't cause a cavity! I'm also kinda happy you wrote it because, for a selfish reason, it tells me you are not gone-gone from the FanFiction world, and maybe you will continue on Who Would Tell. Don't be angry with me for thinking that!
Darsh o |