 Cold-Foxx 2008-06-25 . chapter 4Aw, how sweet. ^^
Being a fan of RizaEd (and your writing style! x3) I really enjoyed this. The characters were in-character and I really loved the plot. Good job! |
 hoenheim-of-light51 2008-01-03 . chapter 4Great story! I think you should just stop it here; it's such a cute ending! |
 RyokuRehara 2007-12-11 . chapter 4I loved it, thought it was absolutly great. I think the best part about it though unlike some of the other fics I've read have been I can actually see this happening, the characters weren't OOC almost at all and I really liked that. And I would really love for you to make it longer. |
 Kite of the Azure Flames 2007-10-28 . chapter 4It's pretty good i liked it a lot, i would like you to continue with it if you could ^^. |
 Scarlet Tears 2007-07-26 . chapter 4 I can't even begin to say how much I loved this story! Thanks so much for writing something so wonderful and good =] |
 MorgyBlack 2007-07-04 . chapter 4oh!! loved it! please pretty please write more! there aren't many good Ed/Riza fics around! |
 Legendary Chimera 2007-06-07 . chapter 4I'm not usually a fan of non-cannon pairings, but this was adorable. I hope I get a chance to read your other fics, I had saved this on my bookmarks for so long it's pathetic. It was so worth the wait. |
 Motosuwa-Hideki 2007-06-07 . chapter 4Its good enough to stop, but where's the more fluffy partS?? > |
 Satoh 2007-06-07 . chapter 4It is certainly worthy of another chapter, but two things come to mind...
1: You wanted to keep it short and it's quickly getting longer XD
and
2: From a fellow writer's POV where do you go from here?
conversely though, I would like to read more. (this is quickly becoming my new favorite FMA pairing((even more quickly than my typing gets worse))
(Positive review, in case I came off a bit two sided) ¬ ¬; |
 dark drow 2007-05-28 . chapter 4 fantastic writing and good ending but im always open for more, if the mood calls for it create :D, ill keep my eyes open to what ever you write, till next time please continue to write your stories are truly a joy to read^^ |
 hiya24 2007-05-14 . chapter 4What Night Alchemist said... pizza... oh and the story too =) |
 Roy Mustang 08 2007-05-14 . chapter 4The chapter was terrific |
 Night Alchemist 2007-05-13 . chapter 4More sounds good...
And pizza, pizza sounds good as well. I like pizza... m...pizza...
Either way, great update! |
 Napster 2007-05-02 . chapter 3Good Job!
Really looking for the next chapter. Update soon |
 Wolf 2007-04-30 . chapter 3 good chapter!! interestin cliffhanger lookn forward to the next installment! |