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Cold-Foxx
2008-06-25 . chapter 4
Aw, how sweet. ^^

Being a fan of RizaEd (and your writing style! x3) I really enjoyed this. The characters were in-character and I really loved the plot. Good job!
hoenheim-of-light51
2008-01-03 . chapter 4
Great story! I think you should just stop it here; it's such a cute ending!
RyokuRehara
2007-12-11 . chapter 4
I loved it, thought it was absolutly great. I think the best part about it though unlike some of the other fics I've read have been I can actually see this happening, the characters weren't OOC almost at all and I really liked that. And I would really love for you to make it longer.
Kite of the Azure Flames
2007-10-28 . chapter 4
It's pretty good i liked it a lot, i would like you to continue with it if you could ^^.
Scarlet Tears
2007-07-26 . chapter 4
I can't even begin to say how much I loved this story! Thanks so much for writing something so wonderful and good =]
MorgyBlack
2007-07-04 . chapter 4
oh!! loved it! please pretty please write more! there aren't many good Ed/Riza fics around!
Legendary Chimera
2007-06-07 . chapter 4
I'm not usually a fan of non-cannon pairings, but this was adorable. I hope I get a chance to read your other fics, I had saved this on my bookmarks for so long it's pathetic. It was so worth the wait.
Motosuwa-Hideki
2007-06-07 . chapter 4
Its good enough to stop, but where's the more fluffy partS?? >
Satoh
2007-06-07 . chapter 4
It is certainly worthy of another chapter, but two things come to mind...
1: You wanted to keep it short and it's quickly getting longer XD

and

2: From a fellow writer's POV where do you go from here?

conversely though, I would like to read more. (this is quickly becoming my new favorite FMA pairing((even more quickly than my typing gets worse))
(Positive review, in case I came off a bit two sided) ¬ ¬;
dark drow
2007-05-28 . chapter 4
fantastic writing and good ending but im always open for more, if the mood calls for it create :D, ill keep my eyes open to what ever you write, till next time please continue to write your stories are truly a joy to read^^
hiya24
2007-05-14 . chapter 4
What Night Alchemist said... pizza... oh and the story too =)
Roy Mustang 08
2007-05-14 . chapter 4
The chapter was terrific
Night Alchemist
2007-05-13 . chapter 4
More sounds good...
And pizza, pizza sounds good as well. I like pizza... m...pizza...
Either way, great update!
Napster
2007-05-02 . chapter 3
Good Job!

Really looking for the next chapter. Update soon
Wolf
2007-04-30 . chapter 3
good chapter!! interestin cliffhanger lookn forward to the next installment!
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