GUH...SELPHIKU GOODNESS!

Oh, that was so...incredibly...lovely. I lvoe how you refer to them simply by their hair-color, so it keep sthe reader guessing and involved and I LOVE this bit: 'And now she’s afraid for the story to end, for the red leather-bound cover to swing shut and crush her in the process, because she’s not the princess, not safe in the dreambound castles of rose glass, where oblivious trumpets play and serenade the heroine to sleep.'

Run-on sentences full of lovely description and poetic words = love. ^^

Plus, as I've said, I am a total and complete fangirl of out-there pairings. I am (as far as I know) the only person who writes Roxith (RoxasXAerith. Yeah, I know, cracky) on

BUT, because of this and because of Valse Triste, you are now one of the crack gods. -bows- I am honored. :D

Once again, fabulous story!

ZAW *heart*

that was absolutely wonderful!
i loved it very much! good job!

carnations = love.

[ loren ]

+OMGOMGOMG.
-blitzball.

+did that come from A Seperate Peace, by any chance?
hahahah. yay.

anywho-+
+love the way the first line and the last line tie the whole thing together. it's like... the stuff in between is the [lovelylovely] details, but the italics are the most important parts.
+i also very much like how you only mention their names in their relationships (selphierikuselphieriku) and (sorakairi)

-(becca)-

Darn you and your superior story-telling skills!

Jealousy aside, this is absolutely beautiful writing. I hope it stays this good for the other 99 one-shots you're doing. Actually, I just hope you can do another 99 one-shots. I'd think one would run out of material after a while.

Can't wait for 002

YES! You know, people should really look at this pairing a little more. Is this going to be a series of oneshots on this pairing? I'd love to see more!

i really liked this!

i thought you did a fantastic job
and this is a very good selphiku.

good job!

[ love ]