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Vuli 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseI can't believe it! One of my favourite SW authors (ah, the good old days!) writing for my new favourite series - I'm currently a puddle of gleeful goo on the floor. XD And you are SO damned good at it. I've read fic upon fic in the last three/four months and found some terrific authors, but even after that I'm astonished how in-character you've managed to write the brothers' interaction. Seriously, I haven't read anything to match it! Just...sheer perfection in fic-form.
Dark-flames 2007-12-23 ch 1,	abuseaw... yeah, Dean'd think it through at some point. Great sub text, great story, oh had me laughing...
bubblesquirt 2007-07-22 ch 1,	abuse>“Dude, I’d steal it quicker if it was worth millions.” “Huh.” Dean took his eyes off the road briefly. “Whaddya mean ‘huh’?” “I just don’t think you would.” Sam replied, his tone easy breezy. -Haha, I love how you used easy breezy! >“Great, because of you and your stupid question I’ve destroyed a family.” -HAHA! >This was too cute!! Very funny.
kristi 2007-04-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseGREAT!!
freaker 2007-03-31 ch 1,	abusehahaha. i love it. dean and his conscience.
DarkMind1 2007-02-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was one of the best humorfics I've ever read! Good job! :)
Tahra 2007-02-08 ch 1,	abuselmao! That was so funny, you captured the pair of them so well! I can't stress how funny I found this story!
hanyou-samurai 2007-01-28 ch 1,	abuseHaha! That was excellent! Poor Dean, imagining that whole scenario ^_^
SpookyClaire 2007-01-25 ch 1,	abuseAhahhahahahha! That's really funny! It sounds like something me and my sister would say! Awesome job! -claire
Princess Kitsune Hi 2007-01-23 ch 1,	abuseLMAO ROFL OMG, that was effing HIGH-LARIOUS! XD Poor Dean killed an imaginary family! ^_^
j 2007-01-23 ch 1, anon.	abusehehe.cute i liked it.nuff said
Rinne 2007-01-22 ch 1,	abuseOh, that was hilarious.
Nana56 2007-01-22 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely loved this! I'm still chuckling. Really great little fic! So typical of what that kind of question brings on.
Ciya 2007-01-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseSo very good. Poor Dean, he ruined a fictional family.
Red Hardy 2007-01-22 ch 1,	abuseOMG! THANK YOU! I just laughed my way through the whole thing, then re-read it and laughed even harder!! There just isn't enough Supernatural humor around anymore but this was priceless!! Some favorite lines... “I just don’t think you would.” Sam replied, his tone easy breezy. “I would. Anyone would. Millions of dollars, there for the taking…” “…stolen off a dead man…” “…Who sure as hell ain’t gonna need it.” -I gotta agree with Dean there! What's the dead guy gonna need a winning lottery ticket for? Dean shifted in his seat, sweat-damp t-shirt and skin peeling off the leather with a weird slurping noise. “I’d take it…gratefully. Maybe I’d even toast the dead guy before I knock back the world’s most expensive shot of whiskey. But after that, I’d stop thinking about him – and not just ‘cause I’d be drunk. I’d forget him as in a ‘huh, so how was it I got so rich?’ way. Then I’d scratch my head, shrug,” Dean gave an example shrug, “and I’d just be happy, killing everything with some seriously expensive gear.” -LOVED this!! I could practically hear the 'slurp' when Dean shifted in the seat! And the 'seriously expensive gear' line... ROTFL!! :D “I’d find something.” “No you wouldn’t.” “You wanna bet?” “No.” “Aw c’mon, I’ll bet my entire imaginary lottery fortune.” -LOL! -And I just have to quote this entire section because I loved it so much and it made me laugh out loud - several times! :D Hours went by and the sun began to set… …And the stupid question kept going around and around in Dean’s head… …Because how would the old man’s family feel if they knew their husband/dad/granddad/brother/uncle/great-uncle/cousin/whatever had won the lottery, only to find out that the one last little piece of happiness that could set the family up for life was gone for good because some selfish bastard stole it? That was the kind of thing that could split families apart. Hell, a few desperate people would probably commit suicide over losing money like that. Damn, imagine that, millions of dollars gone before you had the chance to enjoy it. Sam looked way too pleased with himself. Dean shot him a glare. “I hate you.” Sam laughed. “Told you so.” Dean didn’t answer. He was too busy looking for a bar. But even after he found one and downed two beers and a shot of Jack Daniels, the stupid question was still buzzing around his brain. After ordering another beer, Dean looked at Sam (who was still nursing his first) and told him, “Great, because of you and your stupid question I’ve destroyed a family.” Sam snorted and choked on the beer he failed to swallow. Dean had to slap him on the back a few times to clear his airway. Breathing restored, Sam began laughing helplessly. “T-tell me,” He said between chuckles, wiping the tears off his cheeks. “What did you do to them?” “The old man’s wife died from starvation, his kids no longer talk to each other because they’re too busy fighting over the lost money, and his granddaughter committed suicide because the lottery win was supposed to help out with her college fund.” Sam’s laughter turned him into a quivering heap flopped over the table. “I hate you,” Dean reiterated, finishing Sam’s beer. THANK YOU for a wonderfully funny story!! And thanks to my buddy Phoenix for sending me the link! :)

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