This is so cute! They do have a rather awkward relationship, don't they? I'm rather close to my siblings, so I'm always surprised when I bump into people who are distant with theirs. I can definitely see this though.

This is a really good one.Truly, Jade sounds so like an older brother at the end, haha well that's how he's supposed to be.

I loved the shaky relationship between Nephry and Jade in the game, and you managed to capture it here. Great job.

Griffinkhan, I'll be borrowing a concept from your fanfic in which nephry and jade were abandoned by their parents/ or somthing sort-of like that for my very first one to upload entitled reminiscence. Dont worry I'll not forget to mention you and emphasize the part that I used to show my regards for giving me an idea to work on, dont worry it would just be taht and nothing more. But if ever I'll use another one, I'll be sending you a notice.
- thanks
Icyseraph

Simply...

*love!*

This was beautiful, wonderful, and a joy to read.
You are an exceedingly tallented writer.

...You made me cry^^

Wonderful one-shot. You really capture Jade's personality in your writing, and Nephry's as well. I really wanted to see some sort of fanfic or fanart that could comment on the siblings' relationship, and here I finally found it^^ You have no idea how happy that made me.

From a reader's point of view, the story flowed wonderfully, and there were no spelling errors or grammatical errors that I could see, which is always a plus. I really did love the flow to the story, and the flow of the characters. I really was wondering at one point if there would be resolution between Nephry and Jade...and there was, but you had me wondering.

It was simple, clean, and powerful. Awesome job. I absolutely loved it. Thank you.

Aw, this was really cute... wow... It's because... he just doesn't seem to care when he really does... It's a default. There's always something... with really smart people... I love this! I hope you type more like this. I'm so glad I read it! Wow... He's just like that, ya know? Well, you typed it so of course. ^.^ Nice. I luvs Jade. XD

WOW! Awesome! I love these kinda of stories. they're few and far between, but you do very well! Very very nice!

That was so sweet! You make me really, really want to hug Jade. He's so... well, nice might be a bit strong, but ... so HIM here that I'm just absolutely in love. I like what you've done with this, telling it from Nephry's perspective, which makes for an interesting angle. The references to Professor Nebilim and the curry were also awesome. ^_^ Great fic! ^_^

This fic is just amazing. Your characterization of Jade and Nephry is so accurate and so believable. I love that you had Jade change before Nephry's eyes - personally, I can't imagine her calling him a monster if it weren't halfway true.

Brother+Sister WAFF! This is an amazing piece of work. Apparently kind caring children like Luke and Ion rupped off on Jade the Soft Meanie. "'I'm not sad' He snapped and she realized he really wasn't" one of my favorite lines right up there with him saying he had to lock up Peony to keep him from comming to Nephry's wedding.

Urgh... It's so wrong, but during those last moments, I couldn't help imagining Jade and Nephry as a couple. They really would make a hot couple if they weren't siblings. Dx

I would love to see a follow-up about Jade meeting Mr. Osbourne. The ensuing awkwardness would be a great thing to behold. xD

Aww, how cute!

Beautiful work. I've always had a soft spot for Nephry and you've a wonderful job characterizing her relationship with Jade. I'm especially impressed with your hintings to how Jade's adoption worked out; it's a very plausible scenario and leaves room to explain why Nephry remained in Keterburg while Jade went with the Curtisses.

Definitely adding this to my favorites.

Yay! That was so good! Probably my new favorite! You have such a way with words, I'm very impressed. Keep up the amazing work!

~ Nakoya