That was so beautiful!! *blows nose* I loved it! I wish the ending of the Amber Spyglass could have been different. It made me cry. :( Thanks for the fluff!

that was so cute! I loved the fluff!

Sweet, but a little breif. You use some great descriptive words but it feels a little robotic as events are told to the reader rather than shown. But i enjoyed it nonetheless. Keep it Up!

Nice. Yes, it was fluff- but it was sweet, rather enjoyable fluff. I was wondering, though, where are they and how are they able to be together? If you could perhaps explain that a little more? But don't get me wrong, I liked this. I like how you described the blissful innocence of childhood and how one can rarely have it back except for a few moments every once in a while. And I really liked the use of the metaphor between the snow couple melting and their childhood fading. Good job!