 Meredith Trainor 2009-01-10 . chapter 1Why is this so short? And what's up with the owls? Other than that, good job! No grammatical or spelling errors, bravo! |
 TearDropsOnMyBlueJeans 2007-10-27 . chapter 1Please, just forget about what 'saturnella' said about your little story...
It was really good.
Even though I'm not a fan of incest, I actually support the Klaus/Violet ship, and this was a very well done fic.
"He's falling in deep, and he knows it."
that is what I think Klaus would think.
You described Violet and Klaus in this story really good.
Great job! |
 cream-cheese-girl 2007-09-14 . chapter 1amazing! |
 saturnella 2007-06-09 . chapter 1Violet and Klaus? I don't even know what to say. First of all, that's just plain wrong. They were brother and sister, last time I checked. Your 'story' was honestly terrible. Klaus would NEVER go after Violet. Your making him way too perverted. This wasn't even really a story, it was more like Klaus' thoughts-a blog. I'm sorry, but it was disgustingly horrible. |
 DarlingDearestDeadForever 2007-04-27 . chapter 1This is very sweet, too bad they had to play brother and sister...they look good together. |
 Cry 2007-03-02 . chapter 1 i like it, but why is it so short? i know what a drabble is, but i still want a longer story. |
 pixie paramount 2007-01-21 . chapter 1Oh.
This is GORGEOUS. I swear, you capture them so well throughout this; Klaus is so Klaus and I just adore his musing on his sister, how subtle they are and how more explicit they become--more blantant that this isn't a brotherly type of love.
While I find it kind of gen in the sense that it isn't pairing oriented; it seems more Klaus-centric with implications to something more. Being the shipper I though, I took the latter option of, you know, the implied stuff. Because: "He's falling deep, and he knows..." is the best damn line to express the whole point of his feelings toward her at that point; it's a complete vertigo--
Damnit, now I'm going to write fic and pimp this on the forums because, damn, this is good.
Well done. You capture every little thing about this pair and make it seem eerie and implicit and there--I love it! :D
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