Gorgeous. Beautiful writing, just so lyrical and wonderful to read.

Your ending hung onto me. Like an ending in another book I knew, the Godolphin Arabian. That one went like this
So you see, I have kept the tablet clean, it is for me and for you to write our thoughts and tributes to the King of the Wind, and the slim brown horseboy who loved him.
You have talent, your ending is the type of ending which hangs onto you, refusing to let you go, Be proud, your story She Who Danced with Water is a miracle. Keep writing.

Very sweet drabble.

it was good are u going to make more

That was extremely sweet, and well written. I loved it. It was beautiful, and yet slightly sad, as all the best stories are. It was amazing.

Very romantic! I liked it a lot

short, sweet, and absolutely amazing.

kudos to you for being awesome--not to mention extremely creative and original. this story rocks (albeit in a sad sort of way)!

how do u post a story?

that was so awesome you have no idea

Oh! Incredible exploding love for this drabble!! You just can't say not to this...AMAZingness!! Favorited!!

That was wonderful! I can't begin to say how much i loved this!

Thanks for writing it!

That was beautiful! Great job.

This story is both simple and complex. I love it!

This is the part where everybody puts their hands over their hearts and goes,

"Aw!"

I know I did. This was so adorable. So wonderfully written. You achieved a great amount of emotion with so few words. It's just so incredibly tender and loving, and I feel like you said so much about their relationship without saying much at all.

Unfortunately I have no idea who the two lovers are. No kudos for me. :(

Beautifully done. Instant fave.
~FMN45

Oh. That's so sweet and sad and utterly perfect. ;.;