 Tjikicew 2009-07-17 . chapter 1This was a very drôle story. Excuse my French, but it describes it so ideal, drôle meaning both funny and bizarre.
Thanks for sharing and you deserve more reviews. |
 SickAndWrong 2008-05-15 . chapter 1Oh good lord, my head hurts.
How you were able to hold that together from end to the other, I'll never know. Very cute story, though I think it could be refined a little.
I think the confusion was deliberate, but in a few places I think it crosses a line into near-undecipherability. See there, I have to make up words to describe it!
But very fun; it's much better than I thought it was going to be, in all honesty, after the epilogue to "Follow the Queen." |
 Wispr 2008-05-03 . chapter 1How you was able to keep everything in order was amazing. A very funny and cute story.
Wispr |
 Allaine 2008-04-10 . chapter 1 I can't believe someone besides me has seen House II. ROFL |
 storyreader51 2008-03-13 . chapter 1The one's I got I loved. The one's I missed I'm sure I'll like.
I was waiting for a sarcastic cartoon bunny to appear.
Funny story, all in all. |
 Rei Hino Scout Of Fire 2007-12-25 . chapter 1Lol confedrate soldiers in the basement. Weird stuff, but fun. |
 Desslock3 2007-02-01 . chapter 1Ok, now this story was much better than the first one. The story seemed more focused and the transitions were smooth. I really liked the way differant doors lead to differant and random universes, and the spoof of both Cheers and He-man were great. Mad cap silliness is always a plus.
I can certianly see more mad cap adventures for Kasy and Sheki in the future. |
 mouserr2255 2007-01-23 . chapter 1gonna steal 1 of those Ron's lines and say 'that was bloody brilliant!' lol i was wondering how long until the omnidimensional electric repairman would make a showing ... 'scuse me the fridge is calling ... ok maybe i should let experts handle this 1
=^.^= |
 Pharaoh Rutin Tutin 2007-01-22 . chapter 1A cornucopia of disturbing concepts indeed.
The great thing about time travel stories is that when you finish it, you can go back in time and give the story to yourself so you don't have to spend all that time writing it.
I'm going to have loved your future work. Good luck with the stories you are about to have previously written in the past. |
 creativetoo 2007-01-22 . chapter 1LOL...that was absolutely hilarious.
I thought the original story was funny but this one is even funnier.
It gave me a good laugh, which I needed this morning. :)
Great writing. |
 King in Yellow 2007-01-22 . chapter 1I think the final version is as good as the initial ideas you bounced at me. Some stuff can get killed by overwork. I think we wounded this one is a place or two, but overall I think it remains strong and healthy. Looks like doing laundry may prove hazardous to one's health.
KiY |