Well I haven read the other story, but I just read all of this. Wow. I don't really know what to say. This was a.. I dunno what word, but to say great dosn't really fit. I like the characters and how you've portrayed them. Psych wards aren't all that great places and the doctors are idiots that usually don't know what they are going on about. But whatever. This was a good read and I hope there is more soon. Just one question, uh, what's this got to do with Pokemon? Just curious as it's under the Pokemon section .;;

Only read two chapters, and I'm already upset, more specifically on the 2nd chapter. I actually got kinda sick from Dowasure's encounter with that man.

I really like your style of writing for this, because it fully brings out Dowasure's emotions to a high extent (something I really strive to attain; only very gifted writers can do that). I also liked the descriptions when they man gets killed by those demons, not too much, but not to little.

Now I'm gonna stop and read the last three chapters, then I'll probably review the whole story.