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RockAnatomy
2007-06-09
ch 1,
abusewow...
trackstr88
2007-01-29
ch 1,
abuseO MY GOD!! what is this!! umm.. i am terribly glad the show is not THAT dramatic.. i would nvr watch it again.. i really like the way you wrote it though.. it's a very good intro!! very attention grabbing.. i just feel bad for Burke..
QueenHermystwin
2007-01-23
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was wonderful. I really felt her pain. You may want to consider a beta though. There is a link to a wonderful site on my profile. Great story!, Mya.
Lauriette
2007-01-23
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful writing.

I loved this line:
"Perhaps her mind and body were already developed when she met him, but he helped raise her soul here."

This is so true.
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