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| RockAnatomy 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abusewow... |
| trackstr88 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseO MY GOD!! what is this!! umm.. i am terribly glad the show is not THAT dramatic.. i would nvr watch it again.. i really like the way you wrote it though.. it's a very good intro!! very attention grabbing.. i just feel bad for Burke.. |
| QueenHermystwin 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was wonderful. I really felt her pain. You may want to consider a beta though. There is a link to a wonderful site on my profile. Great story!, Mya. |
| Lauriette 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful writing. I loved this line: "Perhaps her mind and body were already developed when she met him, but he helped raise her soul here." This is so true. |