Reviews for Crystal of Memories

Reviews For: Crystal of Memories

SeShOuMaRU's GuRl 2008-07-20 ch 1,	abuseHello. Although I haven't read your fan fiction, I saw the summary and it caught my attention. Actually, according to the manga; Vampire Knight, already published in Japan (not yet in America or wherever) states that Yuuki is Kaname's little sister. I don't want to spoil you, but I thought I should point this out. It's in chapter 39 or 40, I think, I'm not too sure, but it's pretty up there. But the volume of this information is not out in U.S. or anywhere but Japan.
Refigerator-burn 2008-04-06 ch 10,	abusewowowowowowowowowowowowwowow! sucj good amazing writing. man...you rule!
vampireknightfan13 2007-08-10 ch 10,	abuseaw! That was good! I just have one question...what happen to zero? I love the ending! Imma a yuuki*kaname couple! ^^
Wielder of the Mighty Pen 2007-07-02 ch 7,	abuseListen, it started off okay, but now it's just horrible. everyone is OOC! I just can't read anymore, sorry.
GSandM 2007-06-15 ch 10,	abuseEnglish is not your first language, is it? If it isn't, then that's understandable but if it is, well then there's a serious problem. There weren't any spelling mistakes, but the grammatically errors were absolutely countless that I nearly stopped reading numerous times, fed up. I liked the KanaKi pairing, seeing as I'm an avid supporter of that pairing, but I felt as though this story was more centered about the OC, Kanayuki. (Did you just put together the names Kaname and Yuuki)? Also another part that I found unsatisfying was the fact that everyone mistakes’ Kanayuki for Kaname. In the text it mentioned that they weren't twins, but siblings. Does Kanayuki look manly enough for someone to mistake her as her older brother? That was very disturbing to read, I'm sorry. Well, I do hope you welcome this constructive critisism, and next time you make a VK story, please also consider the personalities of the characters you are trying to capture. There was this one point in one of the chapters that Kaname said; 'Yup!’ something completely and utterly out of character. Instead he should have solemnly nodded, or something of that nature. Thank you for that story, but next time, please put forth a little more endeavor on your behalf. -.- Kura -.-
julnika 2007-05-30 ch 1, anon.	abusehey atemu mana. love the story. especially the kanamexyuuki coupling and how you made zero the villain. lol. love the takumaxkanayuki coupling too.
atemumana 2007-04-05 ch 1,	abuse@ Balh Not really. It's my 2nd language. My first language is Malay. Why do you ask? Anyway, do you like my story? I want reviews. Thank you~!
FlamingfireKitsune 2007-01-22 ch 1,	abuseHi name Cheni i love Vampire Knights when i say the book review of it omg i as oh hell yeah i want to get that i love what you are doing with the story my stories are so nonworth reading cause it has all been done before and i also don't have that much anime exp but i try to make up my own. i also h ave a job that eats up my writing time. well anyway love it u got major tallent keep it up^.^

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