Reviews for Children Can Be Cruel

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NELENAforeverIHATEMILEYCYRU... 2008-07-10 ch 35,	abuseplease continue this ASAP!
Candy Amick 2008-05-11 ch 35, anon.	abuseWhat a great story. Wish you could continue it. You have a lot of talent. Keep it up. God bless you.
Snowflake Springs:) 2008-05-06 ch 35, anon.	abuseThis story is amazing!!
sodapopXluverX4eva 2008-04-18 ch 18,	abuseYour an amazing writer and can't wait for my updates. In the future for a thought I think you should have Tommy and Lily start dating. And then when he wants to take her out some place she has to sneack off and she first goes to MAry Alices and she gets in her dress and puts make up on her and then he later on he tries pulling moves on her and then one of her brothers show up or something. You don't really have to use this, just think it would be a good idea in the future! :)
sodapopXluverX4eva 2008-04-18 ch 35,	abuseI know you haven't updated in a LONG time but I hope you do continue this story! =]
Jenn 2008-03-11 ch 35, anon.	abuseNice update
hellogoodbyeTM 2008-02-28 ch 35,	abuseOhmygod. This is...I don't even know how to put it into words. I love how you make a Curtis really, really little child. And the way you describe her experiences is what every little girl goes through. I think I've done most of the things she did when I was little. I plead guilty to that, and most of all, you find the humor in things which is really hard to do. Especially with the bra and the whole shaving the leg thingy part. Growing up is hard, and I think you captured that wonderfully, especially in Lily's eyes, growing up as a Greaser and just her knowing that's what she is. I would write more, but I don't know what to say! Update. ((:
Lost But Found 2008-02-24 ch 35,	abuseLily was doing so good too, she was following all the rules and not complaining and all that -- but I couldn't help but feel that it was all just waiting to blow up in her face. I'm not going to say that the social worker showing up was predictable, but there were also some tell-tale signs that something was going to happen, i.e. the way Darry was acting. I actually really liked because that's usually how it is in real life. It's not just out of the blue, at least, not if you're paying attention. Now I'm just wondering who wanted the social worker to show up? (Very good two chapters by the way)
lily-james-jon-alanna 2008-02-24 ch 35,	abuseThis is my favorite part: "I could see through the window that Darry was just waiting to kill me." Please keep updating like you have been! your like the best author!
Korin 2008-02-24 ch 35, anon.	abuseThis is the best story I've read on this site in the whole time I've been around here. It's so honest, you can't help but enjoy it. I can't wait to see the next chapter. -Korin-
lovexhopexpeacex 2008-02-23 ch 35, anon.	abusegeez, what a brat. darry should strap her for that.
cooroo 2008-02-23 ch 35,	abusePoor poor poor Lily. Darry really is gonna kill her, isn't he? I would hate to be in her position. I'm glad I know now why Darry wanted them to stay home - it was bugging me, and I just couldn't think of a reason. I'm glad you like the Steve idea - there were just so many times when they conflicted, and it seemed like something Lily would do (to me, at least). Can't wait 'til the next chapter!
Erin 2008-02-23 ch 35, anon.	abuseI just love the way you write about Lily's relationships with her brothers. Soda is such a softy lol. I love the way you're continuing the story. I hope the next chapter comes really quick because I'm interested to see Darry's reaction.
Supergymnast Hiya! 2008-02-23 ch 35, anon.	abuseI liked that chapter and man Darry sometimes gets on my nerves but hey no hard feeling for the guy. I think you've done really well withthis story so I have to give it to you. You're the best writer on fanfiction! Wow 35 chapters are alot.:)
xocrazililkelox 2008-02-23 ch 35,	abuseGreat Update I hope you update soon pretty please?

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