AH-MAY-ZING!

I lovie this story for many reasons such as:

The smooth flow
The awesome dialogue
& The pairing :)

Great Job

I love it! Nice story!!

-SoraxOlette forever!!-

D'aww. That was CUTE.

I love, love, love the whole theme park theme. Stories with theme parks and carnivals and fairs, that sort of thing, they're so easy to adore.

And breaking in the door? Rofl. I had to read that line over and "... Oh yes. She WENT there," ha. But it's highly amusing all the same.

So cute. :3

Aw! I was expecting something angsty and intense but I'll take this! This was good!

Yes. I loved it. So cute. I don't think I've ever read a Sorette but I really really really really really liked this one.

*faves*
airica

(just so you know - yes. i am the worst reviewer. it's, like, my label.)

lol. this is actually a sorette and ironically, i thought this was a kaiora until i read sora mentioning "olette" ROFL. sucketh me xDD;;
uhm anyways! this is fluffy♥ and i do think using dialogues is a good choice. you know, i usually don't use dialogues that much for angst/poetic ficts, but i must admit that dialogues help a lot. they can add great impact to your stories. more meanings. :D

so the conclusion is, dialogues rwk! > 3

so you should try using more dialogues! ♥
iluu !

` MCHLV; < 3 felia.

♥ ZAW ILY!

this was so nice! i really liked
this alotalotalot! thank you so
very much shelby!

:) this made me smile so hard!

you're awesome too (: seriously.

can't wait to see future fics from you!

[ loren ♥ ]

"Wanna break in the desk tomrrow?"

XD
Your dialogue owns my face.