That was an absolutely excellent start and I cant wait to see what happens next, hopefully it all involves Orpheus going darkside and on a massive killing rampage anyways great job and I hope this gets updated soon

Wow what a story, very in depth, very deep.

Wow that was one LONG ** chapter, but damn it was good. I seriouly do love how your giving differnet POV and expanding the story, while keeping as much as you can to the script. Excellent piece of work and hope you finish it.

Damn.. This must be the LONGEST 1st chapter in the history of the site. Congratulations. Must begin reading at once.