Excellent idea. This is almost essential for the plot of the last book not to collapse in a time paradox.

Oh, lovelove. Anything with Shakespeare vibes is friendly, but this has a... I guess a richer tone than you usually have (you present as somewhat dry.) There's also a few runons that don't have a sense of acceleration and onrushing emotion/action that runons are good for, they're just... a bit sloppy yet. But otherwise, it's awesome, and it's AU, and I'm tempted to open up the prenom thread right now. Actually...

...hm. I'll open the prenom thread now, and if I get *poked* at, come and rescue me?

Great! But so sad...I love the way you put Shakespeare in between all the lines--it's very Arty-like. It's just the way he would think. And it's a good idea, too--the alternate time-line; it would be a more realistic way of avoiding paradox, after all. Anyways, great, great job! Keep writing!

You're right, Shakespeare DOES own the universe. Hail thee, magnificant bard.
Anyway, that's beautiful. Disturbing, a little, but it's true... the ripples caused by time warping can't all be good. That's so intelligent, I hate you for it. Well... yeah. That's unfairly gorgeous.

If that made any sense, I may be your servant, Olynara Sedai. if it sounds like the deranged ramblings of a twisted mind, then it's definatly me.

Very beautiful, but sad. I wish I could write better in english... it isn't my first language. :(

Ooh, NICE, to see an alternate Artemis hurtle down the other leg of the Trousers of Time... *Prachettolic*

that was... Great. I definately Loved it. I love the Way you Incorperated the Lines, they fit so Perfectly... Love it.

I love MacBeth. Favorite Shakespeare play, other than Julius Caesar. Love that passage, too. It fit very well into the story. I loved it! Great job.
~Jarlaxle