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Lalis
2007-08-01 . chapter 1
DOUBLE AWW! This was too sweet!
I love how you portrayed little Sammy, he's pretty cute! And you also didn't make it sappy. I like it :)
Visionairy
2007-06-19 . chapter 1
Aw, this was great.
Arinia
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
Aww I adore the wee!chesters and your story is no different. I love how you captured Sammy's desier for normal and Dean's rebellious nature, it made it all the more believable.
supergirl3684
2007-04-01 . chapter 1
Story is cuter then words can say!!
EagleGirl6
2007-01-24 . chapter 1
Ah, that was very sweet! I like when Dean said if the teacher's mean, tell Dad, if the kids are mean, tell him. And Sam already doesn't like fighting. Very good story, thank you:)
irismay42
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
Aw, Kiddie Winchesters melt my heart every time... Especially when Dean's being all Big Brotherly...

Loved this bit:
When people say mean things to you, you gotta say mean things back. Didn’t I tell you that already?"
Sammy goes back to staring down, shoulders drooping. "Don’ wanna be mean," he whispers. "Not like them."

Which is kind of the essence of Dean and Sam really. As is this bit:

"I just wanna be like everybody else."
Dean sits back on his heels. "Well, I don’t," he declares.

I think you've crystalised the boys' characters in a couple of paragraphs there!

Great job!
Luxorien
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
Aw! Cute and fluffy!

I'm convinced that Dean did a lot of bully-beating when he and Sam were in school. Hehe.
Thru Terry's Eyes
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
Aw! Sniffle.
Rebel Goddess
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
Aw. That was so sweet. I love Dean's attitude to dealing with mean kids. Excellent story. That was so very, very cute.
kokomocalifornia
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
that was cute. wish i had dean as a big brother
QSMkitten
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
Aww that was cute. I feel kinda like Sam in this story because I was joked as a kid for what I wore with hand-me-downs and what not. Great story keep on writing.
Poaetpainter
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
that was sweet
angel679
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
Kids are spitefull little ** I swear and yes I have three of them but thankfully they aren't bullies and pretty good kids. Loved the story especially the ending where they had made picture for each other.
Rinne
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
Very very adorable. It fits very nicely with Sam as an adult - wanting to fit in.
j
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
AW!sorry but im a sucker for wee!chesters.i thought the whole thing was adorible.but im kinda wondering dean had a "snot rag'? r u from europe or somthing?if so in america (where bith the charecters and actors are from so much pride!) we call it tissues and we ussaly through them out after use. but anyway loved it.bye now :)
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