 Nutzoide 2008-09-07 . chapter 10Very nice! Not only fluffy and genuinely amusing, but also featuring a very cute and unusual main pairing that I happen to be a fan of. It was definitely worth trawling through the Ranma listings again to unearth this little gem.
And I like the understated nature of the romance for the pair. It leaves a lot of questions open, and doesn't rely on the constant exploration of their budding relationship to be warm and fuzzy. As you've written it, they just naturally are. It makes a great counterpoint to the properly mad plotline! |
 SithKnight-Galen 2007-05-23 . chapter 10Ya know what, this ending works just fine for me. A very funny, overall Takahashi-san-is story. |
 Tabansi232 2007-05-18 . chapter 10How sweet... You were still able to keep the humor-style Rumiko Takahashi is famous for, too, and add in the fluff we're all dying to see.
"While I’m sure many of you are disappointed that there isn’t some big kiss or some overly dramatic coming out scene, I felt like this ending was much more powerful in its subtlety."
Why do I feel as though that was directed at me? Nah, I liked the subtle end. It created a better closure and it made the ending focus on the relationship and feelings for each other than the cliche intimacy actions would have.
Great fic, and I am looking forward for more from you.
Your idiot, Tabansi232 :) |
 Innortal 2007-05-17 . chapter 10Excellent end. Looking forward to your next work. |
 Tabansi232 2007-05-13 . chapter 9So much fluff. I must be drowning in it, but that would be bad. I wouldn't get to read the rest of the story. ;)
Some characters seem a bit OoC, but not the two that are the main focus of your story. Nabiki and Ukyo are very much in-character, and that is pretty amazing considering their circumstance. Akane is so very perceptive. A definite change from her own love life.
The fall gag wasn't overused, and I loved the whole scene with Ranma suggesting Ukyo was dating Kuno's father. Was that insult on purpose or just an innocent conclusion? XP
"Next time on TloD: some stuff happens and Nabiki and Ukyo continue to live in denial. Did I just ruin it for you? I sincerely hope not."
Totally ruined it. How could you? :) |
 Tyverius 2007-05-11 . chapter 1Chapter 1-Alright, we seem to be off to a decent start here. Could use just a little more proofreading in a few places as there are a few places where you missed a word or made a similar minor error. I think your portrayal of Ukyo's right on target. As for Nabiki...yeah.
Chapter 2-Not much to say here other than...oh my.
Chapter 3-I do think perhaps your portrayal of Akane is a BIT exaggerated, though not as bad as I've seen it in a lot of fics. I'm not a total Ranma/Akane fan by any stretch, but I don't think she's horribly evil either, just...bad-tempered. Nabiki on the other hand, is right on perfect.
Chapter 4-Ukyo with a mini-spatula vs Akane with a shish-kebab? *Falls over laughing at the image*. And just in case no one's told you yet, the wooden kendo sword is called a bokken. Nabiki auctioning off Ranma now (as opposed to just auctioning off time with him)...ouch. That may be just a bit far even for her...Kodachi giving away Kunou though...yeah, I can see that. Shampoo giving away Mousse...hmm...maybe.
Chapter 5-Ah, I see, wondered about the matchup. Well, I'll definitely give you points for originality. I don't think I've seen any serious Ukyo/Nabiki fics that I can remember...Anyways, nice job though I felt the scene with Ranma and Akane in the restaurant was a bit shaky. You're doing a good job showing the developing relationship between Nabiki and Ukyo.
Chapter 6-Kuno trying to kill Akane...well, that's a new one at least. Seems a bit out of character for him but then again, he's insane so maybe not. What's with Dr. Tofu? Paralysis powder? The heck?
Chapter 7-Interesting wedding scene, though I really don't see how Genma and Soun could reasonably have mistaken Ukyo for Ranma. Seems a bit of a stretch.
Chapter 8-Not really much to say.
Chapter 9-Really can't see Konatsu doing that, but it does get him out of the picture I guess.
Overall not a bad story, a couple of characters seem a bit OOC but Ukyo and Nabiki, despite there technically being nothing in the series to support a relationship between them, are quite in character. More importantly, it's an original idea. Congrats and keep it up. |
 Moon 2007-05-11 . chapter 9 Wow what a wonderful Chapter. I can't wait until you update ^_^ |
 Innortal 2007-05-11 . chapter 9All in all, a great addition. |
 Archaon 2007-05-05 . chapter 8Not bad at all. Things with Nabiki and Ukyo go realistically slow. Seeing Ranma and Akane together is nice, too. I really enjoyed some of the scenes like the instant wedding or Tofu’s ooc but funny behavior. Akane admitting her feelings like that was refreshing. I expected Mousse to try and protect the R/A pair. Now that the whole circus is in play, things are bound to get good.
Only one gripe, though. There were at least two scenes where you had Ranma tied down on a chair. Give the guy some more credit. The only time I can remember someone binding him was Happosai in the Romeo arc. He chained him, put him in a full body cement cast and buried him in the backyard. Despite all that, Ranma came bouncing, broke the thing and was still in time. He is your regular Houndini.
Anyway, good job out there! |
 Moon 2007-05-05 . chapter 8 Great chapter, I love seeing those two come closer togethor. Please update soon. |
 SithKnight-Galen 2007-05-05 . chapter 8Ahh yes, and the chaos that is Nerima once again hits Tsunami proportions. And now Tarou has decided to enter the scene as well and I am pretty sure that Mousse and Kuno are still going to be launching something dastardly in the very near future. I can't wait to see what rabbit you pull out of your hat next. |
 Innortal 2007-05-05 . chapter 8Definitely intriguing. Keep it up. |
 HWSoD 2007-05-04 . chapter 7 I love this story! keep it up! |
 gort420 2007-04-27 . chapter 7 the wedings not unwanted just premature, they do want to get maried someday. |
 Innortal 2007-04-27 . chapter 7Stranger and stranger. Well done. |