but! Aya! he's not him anymore!@ he's the bad guy! T^T This is so inoccent it really makes me sad.

Ya, that was good, even though it was short. It explains Aya's feeling and her yearnings. cool ^^

wow...this is so awesome! it really shows how Aya feels about her and Aki being separated! great job!

A little short, but good. Really good in fact! :)

I loved it! Especially the last line. "i hope you are still your old self, my other half, the other side of me and not someone else." That is a very powerful line. it shows just how close Aya is/was to her brother and that siblings(especially Twins) have a special bond that is never easily broken. Yes we fight with our brothers and Sisters...maybe even say somethings out of anger, but deep down we still love them. For a frist time writting, i say it's pretty good.

Hey...its very short and simple..but that's the good side of it..keeping it uncomplicated..it's just like the real Aya..especially the line "I found love and comfort in the arms of the enemy"..i like that..