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FlyingHampsterOfDoom
2008-07-23
ch 64,
abuseI forgot to review for Ch. 63 before moving on th Ch 64, but I really wanted to, and since my comps. being slow, I'm not going back.

It was so beautiful, I actually almost kind of cried at how amazing, how rich, and how painful a picture you made. I want nothing more than to draw that scene out right now (you know which one I'm talking about, but I don't want to spoil it for people that read reviews before reading the story)- and most likely, I will. But not until you finish this story for us!
FlyingHampsterOfDoom
2008-07-22
ch 60,
abuseOh, I totally love Cami even more now. Best last line ever for a chapter.
FlyingHampsterOfDoom
2008-07-21
ch 11,
abuseJust-GUH-! I love you so much for writing this! And 70-some chapters! YAY! I love novel!fic. And also, my heart was totally going, 'OMG! What's going to happen next?!' Thank you so much! And just for good measure, I'll add in some extra exclamation marks!
aimsame
2008-07-20
ch 74, anon.
abuse*looks round* I'm missing this fic like crazy. Please don't leave us hanging.
samushy
2008-07-03
ch 74,
abuseWhen are we getting an update. I really miss this story. Please I really need a new chapter.
LostPhan3
2008-06-29
ch 74,
abuseI'm DYING for an update! PLEASE!
Belle
2008-06-17
ch 74, anon.
abuseAhh Update soon I love this! It's one of the best stories I've read!
Kendall
2008-06-15
ch 74, anon.
abuseok this is amazing, and its seriously time for another chapter

im dying here!
Krisi P.
2008-05-29
ch 63, anon.
abuseThis is one of if not the best written story I've read on fanfiction yet. I'm very much looking forward to future updates. So many of these stories come across very immature, which can be fine if the reader is a teenager as well. I was pleasantly surprised by the structure and use of language. You have the ability to help a reader form pictures. You understand the importance of details. That is a huge asset for a writer. Whether it's this or something else, you should continue writing.
Good Luck!
Gabby
2008-05-27
ch 74, anon.
abuse*gets down on knees and begs for more*
mwsc2003
2008-05-20
ch 74,
abuseLove this story and can't wait for an update.
aimsame
2008-05-16
ch 74, anon.
abuseOk *pokes* I'm needing some more here. Hope things are ok on your end.I miss my Reggie and Dean. Not to mention Sammy and his fledgling romance. *Begs* More please!
pinkstarsx
2008-05-14
ch 2,
abuse“Indiana “ he drawled, “Indiana Jones. Pleased to meet you”.

“But really though Dude, ‘Medieval stuff is kinda his hobby’, could you have made me sound any lamer?”

“Well Sammy, with you it’s not that hard, you supply a lot of your own material.”

LMFAO. God, I love Dean. That's hysterical. Seriously, after 2 chapters I'm already getting hooked.
liz
2008-05-11
ch 74, anon.
abuseum...i just read this entire story in pretty much one sitting.

its so amazing that im actually speachless (typeless?)

i cant think of nothing to say that would give it justice...

more please?
Through Darkness
2008-05-04
ch 74,
abuseOh, damn that was a good last line.
And damn if I haven't been enjoying this.
I was really really skeptical at first but I've grown so fond of Reggie and Cami.
Also, can Sam and Dean and Reggie go visit Cami soon? Because if Dean/Reggie can't have sex, then Sam/Cami should have wild crazy sex to make up for it.
There is exactly one thing that bugs me in your story and that is your lack of cuts - lines dividing scenes. But other then that...your work is ingenius, and this is so going on my favourites list. ^^
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