its great!

How sweet...and sad. Your words are pulling at something inside me, can't exactly get a handle on it yet. Anyway, with so few words, you've described so much feeling and strength...a true gift you have, no?

I loved your short simple paragraph. I think it was completely on the nose.

Wow, in a little words you have expressed Harry's insolation for his world, and the people he loves. Wonderful.

Very cool. Could be littile longer, when are you going to update Eight?

Wonderful! Especially for a drabble, you have managed to capture the 'essence' of an abused child perfeclly. Ihermione's instinctive understanding, and her drive to help him, is what I base my own stories on. (H/Hr, if you wonder.) I grew up abused and understand precisely what Harry feels. In fact, the only real differences between Harry and my sibs and myself, is that the ''cupboard' was the basement, and there was no magic. Anytime we were permitted to accompany our father and step-mother anywhere, we would be treated to an hour of chastizementt upon our return. If we did nothing wrong, we'd be made to understand that we were useless anyway. If one of us did *anytting*,(Excptt our step-mother's children of course) we would all be beaten, either one at a time, or more likely, with the rest fo us forced to watch. We hardly ever went out. Alorkin

That was a nice drabble.

I honestly love your writing, it's fabulous. It's amazing that in how short that was, you can write so much. :) A true writer.

A great one-shot I love it:) Keep up the great work and may you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:)

Bye for now and happy new year:)

Good drabble--hope to see more on this theme.

It's amazing that someone can achieve so much in only a few lines. You describe Harry's thoughts and sensations so well, making it known just how much he's suffered and endured.

I'm really (desperately)looking forward to absolutely anything else from you. ^_^

Salut Lily Elizabeth Snape,

some words and I know it's your maner to write ! "I've been so hungry- mind, body and soul" I sigh for this poor boy ! I hope you understand what I want to tell you ! ^^
Thank you.

Severussement vôtre, Dalou28

I would love to see want you write next.





Thank you,



Terri

O.K

I wasn't aware a 'story' was classified as something which was a minimum of 5 lines(or however long this is). What the hell? You've got a handful of sentences which only hint at the protagonist, absolutely NOTHING in the way of plot/storyline. I don't even understand it? Harry likes food after being starved. That's your story. WELL DONE

K, after that rambling...i don't even know why you bothered posting that crap...

Nicely paced! I enjoyed it.