 Scratch 7/4/01 . chapter 1Okay, let me go ahead and review this now! I read it when you first
uploaded it, but couldn't review. Sorry! Anyway... I liked this
(these) story (stories) a lot! I have not read Trowa's Episode
Zero, but I understood your story. It was very good, Trowa was into
character, and I have met Midii. For the Wufei part... also
wonderfully good! He was into character and I like Wu & Meiran fics.
It was also very sweet. I didn't like the negitivity of Sally & Wu,
because as you know I like Sally and Sally/Wu, but you warned me
about that in the notes. Anyway, an overall fantastic fic, maybe
you should write more in this series? |
 Morrigan 6/30/01 . chapter 5 You're wrong, Kawaii Dragoness Shenlonia. Completely wrong. You said in the Notes section that if the reader hadn't already seen the manga, then they would not understand this story. I know next to nothing about Gundam Wing, but I do know something about this fic: I understood the story completely, and I could follow the plot very easily. Only a few good writers can tell *two* stories- the present one and the history of the present one- but you did it very well. Your sentence writing and structure are practically flawless, and poor Trowa's situation made me cry. A wonderful story by a talented writer. Please keep writing. |