|Reviews for Pokemon: The Final Journey|
| SilverBear1992 6/5/13 . chapter 11
I like this story, but it truly does need some refining. I like how you gave a translation for Pokespeak, and how well you have expanded on the already developed characters. It has given me some minor inspirations for my story I am working on.
As for the things I did not like. The breaking of the fourth wall to explain yourself is sometimes distracting. Also the timeline is horribly askew, as an example: Ash wouldn't have Squirtle or Cyndaquil, Squirtle would be back with the Squirtle Squad and Ash evolved his Cyndaquil to Quilava long before now. And if you wanted Ash to win a few leagues a 2year gap is a short amount of time, considering the Indigo League meets every three years. Also names of Pokemon and Cities are spelled wrong, and for the love of Arceus Pokemon plural is Pokemon NOT Pokemons.
| Yashaskar 5/26/13 . chapter 1
Wow 65 chapters is u write u tell me how to write a story?
| Guest 5/15/13 . chapter 1
LOL & nice touch with the jigglypuff.
| Guest 4/21/13 . chapter 65
This is by far the best pokemon fanfiction I have ever read, it actually pains me that you abandoned it. When will you finish it because I know that I and many more will ecstatic if you do.
| infernape2309 3/26/13 . chapter 65
comon it wasnt that bad just a tad slow but i really wanted to know what happens next
and mewto vs hsa was gud story line
| Guest 3/6/13 . chapter 43
If dawn likes ash, than why is she relunctant to take the bushell of roses from ash? Do you even know what that means?
| Guest 3/3/13 . chapter 28
Umm... groudon is a ground type...
Horrible grammer btw
| Pokemon Master 2/22/13 . chapter 65
I liked it
| Guest 12/4/12 . chapter 3
how old are you? you misspelled a lot of stuff in this fanfic. not saying i dont like the story, i love it. you just misspelled some stuff, thats all.
| GeneralBacon9827 11/23/12 . chapter 65
Dude, this is the best fanfic ever. y did u abandon it? a ton of people probably feel the same
| purplous 11/22/12 . chapter 65
Hope this fanfiction continues, ill continue to comment everyday to help! :D im a fan of your fanfiction
| FanFictionAddict 11/21/12 . chapter 1
Dude, your story was amazing! im looking forward to the next chapters to come, ill comment everyday if that helps you, Lengh was first thing i looked for, your's was Long and entertaining at the same time, wasnt once that i was bored, (maybe not as interested in old people romance oak delia) but was very interesting and well described! LOVE IT! ps misty isnt being selfish, she's paniking because soon soon ash will leave her wen he wins
| Leon Dang 11/19/12 . chapter 2
Spelled Sparrow wrong. S-P-E-A-R-O-W. Spelled Varidian City wrong. V-I-R-I-D-I-A-N. Spelled endeavors wrong. E-L-E-V-A-T-O-R-S.
| Leon Dang 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Spelled Jesse wrong. J-E-S-S-I-E. Spelled Dreamvill wrong. D-R-E-A-M-V-I-L-L-E. Spelled Wastup wrong. W-H-A-T-'-S U-P. Spelled Tegepi wrong. T-O-G-E-P-I.
| Guest 11/9/12 . chapter 33
cash is Pokecash / Pokedollars,