“We just end up burying all the important stuff until it comes pouring out”. How very, very true (as I was sat snivelling earlier today). I really liked the characterisations, their matching thoughts on friendship, Jack’s typical sarcasm, and the way you incorporated so much of the back story.

Very good !

I really liked it

Thanks for shared this story with us :)

That was awesome

That was so sweet! I love the 'lets piss him off so he'll stay alive' thought because I think that would be a likely reaction in the situation. Good work.

A really great story, but it was sometimes confusing to read due to the dialogue being stuck in the midst of a huge paragraph. I'd prefer a new line for each speaker.

All in all, a very nice story.

Really enjoyed this story. It was nice to have the in depth dialogue between Jack and Daniel and to go to town with the angst. It worked so well.

Great characterisation, sweet story.

Very nice friendship fic. Good Jack & Daniel points-of-view.

great story!

Great story, nicely done. The slow realization was good and in character for both of them. Thanks for sharing.

I like that, very well done, only complaints are 3 spelling mistakes of charachters names, O'Neill has 2 "L"s and you misplaced the apostraphy in Teal'c an Ba'al's names. They are easy mistakes and don't really make a difference but I noticed and its something I make mistakes on sometimes too so just trying to be helpful. Again, well done

I love this story; Jack and Daniel feel so real, and I love it that they can talk about their friendship and not push each other away.

Very good.

I really liked this story - keep up the good work!