wow, that took a while to find out that it was bubbles! still don't know what really happened, but this story was written beautifully! ...i thought it was really dramatic, so...why is this marked general?

so dramatic! gotta read on to find out what the heck this chapter really is!

Wow. You have such a wonderful writting style. It was pretty dark, and violent, but it was truly a work of art.

Ok, person who finds a period is the best name in the world. Are you agreeing with me, or disagreeing? You said I was a dumbass, though from what I can tell through your review, it looks like you said the exact same thing I did. Of course I can't really tell since you have no proper punctuation in your review for me to actually tell what you are saying.

is dracori 4 reel there;s no plot no hint of who she;s writting about it;s to vague dracori is a dumbass

You have a very nice writing style, but I think there is a lot missing. Who is this story talking about? Blossom? Bubbles? Buttercup? Who committed the crime? Sometimes it's for the better of the story to leave a few details out to keep the author wondering, but I think you overdid it in this case.

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