A great story. Very good.

Nice job, this is a very good story! I thought that you kept all of the characters very in character. Thank you very much for posting it!

Very, very nice.
I quite enjoyed reading about this. Poor Luke. I love how you have portrayed him. And poor Vader. Knowing he's done the wrong thing, but not seeing any way to change anything.

Good beginning I'm really surprised that you haven't continued this tale . . .

I really liked this one. Luke is so cool as a seven year old! And I like the interaction between Ben and Luke. Great job!

Great start, I really like it a lot. I can't wait to see where you go next with this one.

Oh, I really liked that! It was nice and sweet to read. Great job!

What is the weird word beginning with U?