RAWR. So angsty. Katie seems much like that type, just like Oliver. Where is he? drowning himself in the showers?

I like the "poetically structured" kinda-thing.
It works really well with the feel of this piece, kinda angsty and downtrodden.
I really liked it!
Keep up your rhythm ;-)

aw.
very poetic.
I didn't understand what was going on, though. so I'm going to go read the sequel now.

Wow, I don't think I have ever read anything like that from you before. It was compleetly different from all the other stuff you've wrote, and I like it.

I'm trying to put my finger on what was so different. I think it's that it was serious, but not angsty or mopy, or teenagery. And it was sort of in prose, though I actually didn't catch that till you mentioned it. This was a one shot made mostly of description, where as most of your stuff is diologe, so reading it was a different esperience. And I must say, you have a wonderful talent for descriptive writing. I don't remember this scene in the book, in fact I can't place it at all, but I have your version perfectly im my head. That's impressive. I'm off to go read your promised sequel, so you'll here from me later.

you will NEVER be rid of me. MUWA HA HA HA HA!

hahahahaha. i love you.

first of all, thank you for writing a beautifully poetic piece for me. i am very honoured. And may i add here, Ladies and Gentlemen, that poetry is not all about rhythm. It is about content and being able to string words together in a way that makes people think about the content. it's about emotion and being able to convey it using words. that is poetry, darlings. And Giddy, your poetry is lovely. it doesnt need to have rhythm to be poetry, dear.

Naw... Fred with his sticky-uppy hair. haha. so cute. just like he should be. But where is Oliver? oh that's right.. drowning himself for losing to the HUfflepuffs. dear me.

Well, I'm off to read the next one.
Love love.
Ash xx

thats really poetic. i love it. tops! sorry to leave such a short review but i gotta go put dinner on. i'll talk later!

the second story will correspond with this one, right? PLEASE say yes, i really want to know! it was good, a bit cryptic the first time i read it, but it definitely clicked. Nice Job!

Very good writing. Angsty, but a real good nice touch to it. Good work!

Woo! First reviewer!
:Ahem: Anyways...wow, that was good. Very poetic. Really liked it! It's easy how we readers put up with you...we review, and you give us a story! LoL! (Man do I sound mean...but I'm not...just sarcastic...)