wow...im lost of words. This is great! And no dialogue makes it "original" ((honestly)). Great job!

Hi excellent piece. I really love it. Would you ind if I added it to my C2? If you don't want it on there, tell me and I'll remove it straight away. keep writing!

oh that was so sweet!

Your story was magnificent- it took my breath away! Achingly tender and triumphant!

aw
super adorable fic!

Confused as to why the lyrics are in this story. They totally disrupt the flow of what is otherwise a decent story. The work would be best served by removing it, or, if you can't live with out the lyrics, putting them at the beginning of the story.

Sweet story.
Close your eyes
and you can ear
the beat of the waltz.
One, two, three.
One, two, three.
One, two, three.