Oh my god. I love it. I cried actually. T.T You are a wonderful writer I must admit.


-Akane

that was so beautifully written and accurately depicted. Good stuff, i hope it doesnt come to that though.

oh god, im all teary eyed...that was powerful...that was good...that was...so sad! so, let me get this straight, the sasuke was just a ghost type memory thing? how sad...but such a good idea...sniff sniff, wonderful story, 10 out of 10.

Lol reviewing is good for your karma. If you read this fic with the Instrumental of Yuna Ito - Precious it gives a more dramatic affect.

I liked it, wanted for SasuSaku though. But because I see you're not a fanatic of them I shouldn't be expecting more. lol.

Nice fic. =]

wow!! that was deep!!

Wow. Extremely interesting piece, I had a good time reading.
Thank you for writing, and I'm waiting for other naruto stories form you ;)

Hi! good work!...I didn't like the pairing idea, but unavoidable right?.

Okay, does it matter about typos and word choice in a fanfic writing? I can be annoyingly literal, and almost always pick up the typos and grammatical errors. So let me know for future reference. there are few ones in here...

Quality: I stopped watching Naruto when the fillers dragged on, so I was still in the childhood phase, and was shock that the plot is based on adulthood lives. So, personally, it was an uncomfortable feeling when I realized thru your hints that the 2 had a relationship, but then your fast writing flow reeled me in, and had me reading on and on...nice descriptive imageries, I could picture them in my mind. (I don't read the manga either, so hopefully this version is not a close parallel version to the ones that will come out on fansub, *cross fingers*...don't want Naruto to die!)

I like your dialogues exchanges...smooth.
There's this ominous feel throughout...and silly me, hooked to your words, and didn't realize Sasuke was dead until almost the end. I thought his appearance was thru some ninja-magic/ chakra telepathic communications,etc...

write some more with different twists, and more chapters...

That was a litle... okay a fair amount of sad and half-wa through my mind said: He's dead. Good story.