Hi.
Um, I thought I would write you a motivational review.
I really love this story. I love the whole plot and everything. I really like the fact that its not Zutara (Kataang side: SQUEEYAWOOT!) but there is still the little touches of it like ‘Water Dove’ (Zutara side: YAWOOTSQUEE!)
Please continue. I’m not going to tell you to hurry up because it’s not fun being rushed. Heck, no one really reads or reviews my story and I feel rushed!

So Yhea…
This has been a motivational review from

~SweetnessnaRose

THis story had me sitting at my comp. nonstop for 5 full days. I lovylovylovy Loved it! Write more! Write More!

~Sweetness

PS. Just wonedering, Why didn't you bring back Yue for the spirt/Ghost thing?Still loved it though

This was great! And even though you're dissatisfied, it was still a powerful read. The whole last days of Zuko part from Iroh's perspective to Aang's was amazing.

I just thought about this fic the other day (partly because of your great call on the blood-tie - congrats). I was afraid you'd lost interest in it now that season 3 has arrived. I'm glad to see you haven't.

I agree with you about Piandao, and a Piandao/Ursa romance would be great, except that I'd be jealous of Ursa. ;)

Keep up the good work!

I hope you're happy! I was watching the Fire Lord and the Avatar and at the end I said, loudly "OH MY GOD, PLUSHULALA WAS RIGHT!" thus earning me the title of 'crazy-wtf-is-she-on-about-girl' in my family. Which has led to merciless teasing by my two older brothers. *glares, then grins* OMG I love this story! But, I thought parts of it were a little unclear to me, probably because I'm ill and haven't slept in 2 nights. How did Zuko die? But I still love the story!

Lords I love this story. The witty banter between characters, most notably Katara and Zuko's, is sublime. Not once have I come across a fic in this fandom where sentence to sentence is such an enjoyable read. They're no dull spots, no points that seemingly drag on endlessly.

I have to say that I LOVE that your story IS a severe deviation from what will be book 3. I enjoy very much that you have taken the time to come up with you OWN story, and are not just rehashing what may or may not come to pass in book 3; which seems to be the Thing-To-DO in many fics recently. So, more power to ya!

I agree with your decision to show the Fire Nation as a place that is rich in culture and traditions through dancing, music, art, and theater. I cant wait to read about it!

So, I early await your next update, and I cannot FATHOM as to why you do not have many, MANY more reviews. Guess people cant realize brilliance why they read it!

your story is so awesome!! i can't read it without laughing out loud! is it gonna be zutara? (please please please DO!)

Oh...me like this story...

I was glad to see an update this morning! And I do love Zuko's ooc-ness. I think because it's very specific and once you established it, it was consistent, so it's easier to live with than some other ooc Zuko's out there.

Sorry about your friend. I take small exception though to calling the Pentagon attack a 'bombing'. My friend's wife was on that plane and there was no reason for her to die at the Pentagon except that she was transported there on a flight that was originally meant to take her to a business meeting. I wouldn't mention it except that there are people who have tried to say it was indeed a bombing and not a plane and to watch my friend suffer through that is heartbreaking.

Back to the story! I love how Zuko was taking charge in Ba Sing Se. It's especially effective since we all know what eventually happened to him.

The thing with the kid is important to the spirits' expectations of Zuko it seems. Everyone else seems to have had an encounter with someone they loved, but Zuko's was with a stranger. Like it.

Oh Mai. So often I think I'd like for the Mai on the show to be like one I'm reading in fanfiction and this is one of those times. You really give her a needed dimension while keeping her behavior pretty much in character.

And Roku is Ursa's uncle? Wow! He's gotta be ticked about what happened to her, eh?

Write more soon!

WOah, this story rocks! Your non emo Zuko is the best! It's really surprising a story this good has few reviews, I mean with great humor( The forbidden recreational uses of waterbending anyone?) and the Paranormal what more could anyone want?

Hello,
I nshould do a proper review of this, and I will once I finish another massive review I have pending. But I just had to say this;my boyfriend is creepily similar to your crazy, Zuko. hm I'm not sure that's something I should be proud of admiting...
Anyway please keep this going. You have great imagination!

I love this story!! this new Zuko is so random, i wish he was like that in the real show. i want to know what happens next!! thanks

I'm glad you're keeping up with this story. I wish the show's writers did Mai more like you. Shsh. I didn't say that.

Still creeping me out after all these chapters. How are they going to find sweet lil Zuko?

Looking forward to your next chapter.

I've been reading for a while, but I haven't reviewed. This is cool, creepy but wicked. I really like this story, and Mr Smiley Face is the work of a crazy mind (that's a compliment) and I wouldn't be that surprised if he was Zuko. I really like the new annoying Zuko, I love him being off his rocker! I can just imagine what'd have happened if Azula had gone to Ty Lee... Mai said 'Long time no see.' Ty Lee'd say 'AH!' and fall over.

I don't get it. How can a story this brilliant have so little reviews? I think that too many people are looking for Zutaras and kataangs these days(trust me, I was, until recently, one of them). Yet yours is superbly written. More must know about this!

i still can't believe you don't get more reviews for this story!

the dialog is always excelent (and hilarious) even though this chapter was a bit more serious.

I can't wait (as always) for your next instalment to see what happens to zuko (i love the way you write him. absolutly amazing) and the whole ursa thing!

please keep updating!

AKI