I really like the story so far. Continue soon please!

--Shaded-Strike

Badabababa... still loving it! :)

Faunamon: I'm back, and I've brought along the two main characters of my new Warriors series, The New Generation - Foxpaw and Snowpaw! (Later Foxclaw and Snowfeather)

Snowpaw: Yeah, only I'm the REAL star, cause Foxpaw's too dumb. It's probably because he's a tom, and everyone KNOWS she-cats are better.

Foxpaw: (Leaps on Snowpaw)

Faunamon: 0_0 They really like each other... you just can't tell 'cause they're killing each other half the time. Anyway, are the kits the ones who will betray? Hope not. And I really like the name Leopardkit. But hten, Leopardstar was always my favorite leader. There were never many she-cat leaders. I wonder why not? (As a girl, I wonder these things...)

Snowpaw: There should totally be more she-cat leaders.

Foxpaw: WHAT? No WAY!

Faunamon: Well, I love the story but don't like the suddenly shifting POV. By the way, I visited your webcomic today and voted on it (and hope others will too), and have started thinking about creating my own. Seriously. Well, anyway, I can only see the first page. But I voted anyway.

Snowpaw: She'll be accepting awards for this later.

Foxpaw: ...

Faunamon: Foxpaw, she's kidding. Well, these apprentices and I have droned on long enough. See ya next chapter! :D

weird france.really weird

interesting, but very strange names
under summary it said 'complete'
didn't seem complete to me

Hehehhehe...very nice France..why do i have the feeling you are mocking me? oh well...nice story though...if i had to rate on a 1 to 10 scale i'd gice it 9.6...so yeh...

I call it a cliffhanger! I love kits! (I'm writing a story about wolves where a wolf named Lilly has pups, though, so that might be why... But her kids Sun and Moon aren't even around to see it, bad them.) Well, anyway, I think it's a LITTLE strange that they just met and left without even waiting for a sign or anything, and that Thornpaw would just rush right into telling her mentor, but it's still a good story. Really.

Okay look. It is a good story and all, but honestly, some of these names could use some work... Poisengas? Smartkit? Geedpaw? Betrayalkit? Passionpelt? What about Nightwind, Windpelt, Redfur, Icestorm, Firestorm. The others are good... but some could use some work. Other than that it is a good story! This is not a flame! I encourage you to write more! Update!

-Nameless Nightmare-

O_O She MISSED the quarter moon... bad Thornpaw! I know what you mean. Whenever I write Warriors stories it's REALLY hard to think of names sometimes! Yesterday I came up with the worst one ever... WINKSONG... Well, it's okay! But seriously, I think you could write the books if you wanted to! This is great, and you know all about the herbs and stuff! The only thing I didn't like was how it started off almost exactly the same as The New Prophecy, but one of my stories (my very first Warriors story) did too so I guess I shouldn't say anything, huh! :) Please, write a new chapter soon!

Mostly cool names. I found a few problems with some, though:

Betrayalkit - Let me guess, she betrays her Clan. I can't think what mother would name her kit that.

Greedpaw - See above

Poisongas - Um, do cats even KNOW about gas? I like the name, but...

JUST MY OPIONIONS. Don't take it personally, please!

My favorite names:
Differentpaw
Flightpelt
Strongheart
Ghostpaw
Newstar
Falconfoot
Moortail
Calmeye
Frostglacier
Cryingclaw (Interesting! Points for you!)
Lovekit
Royalpaw
Miragefur
Curepool
Gingerfox! I luv foxes!
Riverstorm
Passionpelt
Crimsonpaw

So you've got more good than bad ones! Please, like I said, don't take it personally that I don't like some! I can tell, this is going to be a GREAT story!