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georgie 2007-09-27 ch 2, anon.	abuseTHat is really good and i think you captured cam perfectly...While am here any chanceof a sequal for cure?
Verity Kindle 2007-06-25 ch 1,	abuse"When we were trapped in that car, and we didn’t know if we would live out the hour or even the minute, her faith in Booth was palpable. And unexplainable. Brennan only ever puts her faith in science. But now it’s science and Seeley Booth." YEAH!
Sarcastic102391 2007-05-13 ch 2,	abusevery well done good concept
julsus 2007-04-14 ch 2,	abuseZack's a sweetie & Cam's plain annoying (to me anyway - can't believe Booth slept with her again). Cam doesn't seem the jealous or envious type to me though, so I'm not sure about her BB POV (except the part about her being an outsider).
julsus 2007-04-14 ch 1,	abuseWriting "Aussie" doesn't bother me, but probably because I am Aussie & didn't even notice it! Ange & Hodgins were spot on. I'm off to read part 2.
Knuckles515 2007-04-07 ch 2,	abusejust keep going with it. do her dad and russ and all the guys she's been with. maybe tessa, rebecca and parker, too. its pretty amusing. then maybe you can write "insiders"...
sheBONES 2007-03-27 ch 2,	abusei think russ or her dad, or even sully would work well if u want to continue (which u of course must do). I know u havent seen any of the new episodes so u don't know sully, i can't believe Australia is only through S.1! That sux so bad I'm getting sympathy pains. I don't know what to tell you, except u can get the 2 or 3 most recent episodes (full length) for free on Myspace. I missed last week's episode on tv due to this homo little thing called school, so i just watched it on my laptop in class. I don't know why college teachers think they're so smart...anyway, good chap, keep going, blah blah u know the drill. Hopefully u can find some newer episodes for your poor Bones-starved mind cuz God knows I'd go crazy! ;)Stephanie
goodnight kiss 2007-03-06 ch 2,	abusei would definetly read it if you did david and russ. so, continue with them! ~goodnight
dawn-roberts 2007-02-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like this, especially the bit about Zack. My only criticism is that you write very...British? Or English, I can't make that distinction. Not that there is anything wrong with that type of dilect of the English language because it isn't that at all,it just makes some statements a bit out of character. For example, "If only they'd bloody well kiss" (while being totally true) doesn't sound like something the average exasperated American would say. More like "If only they'd freakin' kiss!" Or something like that. Its the "British speak" that kinda puts a damper on the otherwise amazingly written pieces.
ladybrin 2007-02-02 ch 2,	abusewell i enjoyed everything- i think ou did a good job-- and yeah it would be kinda nice to see what russ thought abut them- maybe even david too- since we have cam's viewpoint-
Christy 2007-01-26 ch 2, anon.	abuseI like the slight differences in the points of view. I wouldn't mind seeing David and Russ, but also Dr Goodman and Cullen (Booth's boss?). That perspective would be interesting too.
kwizbit 2007-01-25 ch 2,	abuseThis was great! It's sometimes hard to get into the characters' heads, but I think you did a pretty good job. A couple things they said seemed a bit off-character (just to be honest), but most of it was actually very in-character! And for some one who hasn't seen the episodes with Cam in them, you did very well. Off to read the next chapter of Pain! :)
Cora Clavia 2007-01-25 ch 2,	abuseI really like this! Good idea with David and Russ. Maybe her dad too? Just a thought . . . great job.
squint-squad 2007-01-24 ch 2,	abuseI'd really like to read one from dep. director Cullen's point of view! Loved it, thanks!
Miss Poisonous 2007-01-24 ch 2,	abuseNo, I love it! Simple and sweet. Outside views are always good, especially when there are so many inside views already! Continue as long as the muse allows!

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