oooooo...Iliked this and now im going to get some pizza

Finish please and hurry! I love it, I love it, I love it!

Ooooooh! I love this series! I can't believe I hadn't discovered it until now! This is definitely going on my favorites list! Write and post the next chapter soon! -_-

You're doing a beautiful job with this story so far - I'm really looking foward to the next chapter. But I just have to say that I don't agree Sasami would necessarily make Tenchi the happiest. Yes she's bright, cheerful, kind, sensible, and a great friend to Tenchi, but all of that is null if Tenchi doesn't love her. Maybe with Ryoko everyday would bring some new danger, but he would be happy just to be with her, if he loved her. And maybe with Ayeka he would be away from home and alienated, but once again that wouldn't matter if he loved her. You can't chose who you love, it's as simple and complicated as that. These girls each have different strengths and weaknesses, but each one deserves to make Tenchi happy.

MUST YOU STOP THERE? ::sniffs:: I love Tenchi and Ryoko stories! (Maybe that's why I write them?) Can't wait for the next one, good job! ***Mystical Star-

I have been confused...but then again, that's the story of my life. This story is a rather depressing one, the kind that makes you want to scream "NO NO NO NO! That's not supposed to happen! They're supposed to live happily ever after!" But in truth, nobody ever does live happily ever after. This story is very good. ***Mystical Star-

Alright, WHO is screwing the Masaki family over? There has to be someone on the inside who wants Ayeka off the throne...Good job! You got my brain working (just in time for the first week of school...Mystical Star-

::mouth drops on floor:: OMG! This is sooo good!***Mystical Star-

AAK! What did you do to Sasami? It's always the nice ones that crack...This chapter was wonderful! Well, I'm going on to the next chapter! ***Mystical Star-

::stars pop up around Mystic's head and in her eyes:: This story is WONDERFUL! I love it! One suggestion: Try not to repeat words and phrases within a three sentence radius. Other than that, it's really good!

can't wait for the next chapter

cruel, cruel, cruel, all this cliffhanger stuff, *sigh* luved the chapter and can't wait till u have the next one out...

This was still a good chapter. I'll be waiting for the next

Mean! How can you do this to me? That was so darned close! Can't wait for the next chapter. Ja ne!

Awesome, real dark. I can't wait for the next chapter