 Zephyr of Shadows 2007-03-21 . chapter 1O.O wow, Serenity never struck me as that... creapy of a lady, ya know?? I liked this, kinda, but the personification of serenity kinda freaked me a bit, don't persoanlly think that that is what she is like. Your fic though, so, yeah =D Truely inspiring and inspired work yet again =) Seriously though, the ship strikes me as much... warmer than that, I mean, Kaylee is technically her "heart" nearly as much as the engine is, ya know? And Kayless never struck me as that cold *shrugs* enough crazy rantings from the Browncoat =D |
 Adi88 2007-01-26 . chapter 1Oh. My. Akito. Go Inara! Corrupt the boy… wow, Simon’s almost as dim as Shino. Open your eyes, laddie buck. Now I’m all raring to go and see if this is just for fun or foreshadowing.
“He was a doctor, after all. He could outwit a ladder any day.”
“That, Simon admitted to himself, was rather odd behavior for a ladder.”
- So~ fun. All whimsical and clever. I’m happy.
“You can call me Poppy, because that’s what I smell like.”
- So cute. And also, after too much Wizard of Oz growing up, slightly ominous.
“And he wanted his Meimei back.”
- That, and the line above it… I don’t know, just lovely. I so adore how you write River, and her insanity. You have a knack for insanity, you know. [Oh shit. I never actually technically what you might call REVIEWED “Mindless”, did I?] But this is all River, and you do that dislocation thing. All the facets. What’s in a name, with River, Meimei, Poppy… I dunno. [I sound like Delirium. “I don’t know. You know?”]
Ha! Oh, I just realized the irony of that. I have GOT to get you on Sandman and writing Del. Could I be less linear? …It’s infectious.
Correction:
“AMd River didn’t remember anything about it…” M instead of N. |