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ticass11
2009-12-02 . chapter 30
liked this story and hope you continue. Was a little disappointed that in some places Bo's scars and other changes were not addressed. Also the scene where Jesse hoped that Luke would be the first to beat death...Bo had already done that right? he was being taken off life support but luke would not let them. I thought Bo should have fought harder to keep Luke alive and give him the chance to live like Luke did for him.

all and all thought I really like your writing style and your attention to detail. the way you portray ** is really good (he doesn't get enough credit in most stories)
Keep writing :-)
mrslukeduke
2009-11-30 . chapter 5
Please try to update soon I sure would like to know who hurt Luke.
Kristy Duke
2009-11-01 . chapter 30
Thank-you for the chapter update! It was worth the wait! Though am wondering if this Jimmy guy is really the person that did it all as Bo thinks or what he wants with Luke's ring and why? And where Bo go to now...and why? LOL. Once again, a great chapter - very well wrote all around. You did an awesome job with Bo and **!

Keep up the great work! Am looking forward to chapter thirty-one!
Sarah
2009-11-01 . chapter 30
OMG...this chapter was worth waiting for !! Thank you for such a well written chapter..had me in floods of tears. Especially the bit about Lukes ring...brilliant. Please don't make us wait so long for the next part !
Long Live BRUCAS
2009-11-01 . chapter 30
I hope the police believe everything Bo was telling them.

I wonder where Bo went now. What else could he possible do. The police has the guy.
mrslukeduke
2009-11-01 . chapter 30
What a nice treat I got my Halloween wish now all the pieces are
starting to fall into place but now there's another problem .
Bo is missing and if Jimmy says he didn't do it than who did?.

And why in the world would Jimmy want Luke daddy's wedding ring?.
i can't wait for the next chapter please write more soon.
Anakin's Girl 4eva
2009-11-01 . chapter 30
Aw poor Bo! Great chapter as always cousin :) Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work! xx
mrslukeduke
2009-10-07 . chapter 3
I'll be looking forward to your next chapter hopefully soon".
I really love this story it is one of my favorites and i sure
hope that this jimmy person can give Bo the answers he needs.
mrslukeduke
2009-10-01 . chapter 2
I really can't wait to see what happens next in this great story",
hopefully this Jimmy person can answer Bo's questions something
tells me that he may have something to do with Luke's accident.
Angie
2009-09-27 . chapter 29
Great story, hope you update soon. Seems like you got more to this one yet. And maybe Luke aint dead afterall...
mrslukeduke
2009-09-18 . chapter 4
You promised that the next chapter wouldn't take this long ",
I have been patiently waiting for weeks now and i keep hoping that
you'll update soon and I'm also curious as to who jimmy is .

Maybe he can give Bo the answers that he has been looking for and
and for Luke's sake i hope Bo makes whoever did this to Luke pay,
i got me a bad feeling that somehow a drunk driver was involved.

Was Luke the person who Jimmy found by the brook ? It's shame about that barn fire but does it tie into Luke's accident.
Anakin's Girl 4eva
2009-08-22 . chapter 29
I still dont think Luke's dead, I recon Jimmy's got him :p Glad you updated cousin, maybe I should go away more often then you got no choice but to write as we can't rp :p LOL update soon!
SamwiseAtHeart
2009-08-17 . chapter 29
Hey there, I'm glad to know you're alive. I hope your move goes well. Thank you for updating.

This was a good chapter, I can tell Bo is anxious. I'm curious about this Jimmy fellow. Don't keep us in the dark too long.
B.L. Davenport
2009-08-15 . chapter 29
Great as always I can't wait for more I hope Bo finds this Jimmy guy and gets the answers he's looking for.
Long Live BRUCAS
2009-08-15 . chapter 29
Cant wait for more

I wonder how this jimmy person is. Hopefully he will be there and can help.
It seems like Bo and ** are finding more clues to help them.
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