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| siapom 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story, and I'm glad you've joined the challenge. Welcome! And, good luck! :) |
| BonesDBchippie 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseshadowkat, WELL, I always try very hard to read/review ALL entries. As for your FIRST entry...Not having ever read your other fics your writing is GOOD! The explanation of "her secret" was a little vague--not that it wasn't interesting--but it left me wanting to know WHY it was her "only memory". CREATIVE idea though! I LOV'D the "flashback"--VERY intense! KEEP WRITING!! And Good LUCK in the Challenge! ~G :D |
| squint-squad 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseaww, that was slightly sad. I loved it though. Good entry. |