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Reviews For: Cam's Secret

siapom
2007-02-04
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this story, and I'm glad you've joined the challenge. Welcome! And, good luck! :)
BonesDBchippie
2007-01-24
ch 1,
abuseshadowkat,

WELL, I always try very hard to read/review ALL entries. As for your FIRST entry...Not having ever read your other fics your writing is GOOD! The explanation of "her secret" was a little vague--not that it wasn't interesting--but it left me wanting to know WHY it was her "only memory". CREATIVE idea though! I LOV'D the "flashback"--VERY intense! KEEP WRITING!! And Good LUCK in the Challenge!
~G :D
squint-squad
2007-01-24
ch 1,
abuseaww, that was slightly sad. I loved it though. Good entry.
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