Reviews for For Christine's sake

MadLizzy 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is truly outstanding. I was hypnotized by the pace of it, by the carefully constructed parallels that explored the differences between characters. There were a couple of technicalities I'd like to mention. I did stumble over one typo: "the things had had" should be "the things that had". I also wondered about the grammatic construction of "It were" twice in the last paragraph. Shouldn't it have read, "They were" in both places? Regardless, you're an enchanging writer and I am ever your devoted fan. ~ml
The Trousers in Small Jars 2007-04-05 ch 1,	abuseAw... I loved this. This is a cute
Icelands 2007-01-25 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. Sad. Good! I like this. Good work!
Timeflies 2007-01-24 ch 1,	abuseShelfish weren't they, not seing that she needed them and not anything but to share in the moment of that day. Now she was alone giving birth. Good short story.