Aw! How cute!
You're really good
at writing Hiyori!
:D!

~Drop Of Poison

Wow, this is a gem of a fic-let. You captured a very human view of Hiyori - as older than she looks but still able to be childish. I like the fact it's through Lisa's perspective, and the line: "It was a bit selfish, but Lisa enjoyed seeing that in the other girl".

Keep writing! (and the Vaizard need more love; I wish I could write decent Bleach-fic!)

~MN

That's so kawaii! Lisa is I think that Lisa is such an under-rated character!
Great fic!
SD04