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| Drop Of Poison 2008-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseAw! How cute! You're really good at writing Hiyori! :D! ~Drop Of Poison |
| Missed Nin 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is a gem of a fic-let. You captured a very human view of Hiyori - as older than she looks but still able to be childish. I like the fact it's through Lisa's perspective, and the line: "It was a bit selfish, but Lisa enjoyed seeing that in the other girl". Keep writing! (and the Vaizard need more love; I wish I could write decent Bleach-fic!) ~MN |
| Sweetdeath04 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseThat's so kawaii! Lisa is I think that Lisa is such an under-rated character! Great fic! SD04 |