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A,B,C, I Hate You
2007-09-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseTravis... Travis... Why does that name seem so familur to me when i think of K.H.?
specialraven
2007-06-10
ch 2,
abuseLike the name. Travis. Ha. Nice story, I'm loving Zexy and Travis!
maluka
2007-05-09
ch 2,
abusethis is pretty good yet confusing still. i guess it made a little more sense when you brought the timeline in so yeah that makes it easier to follow. anyway great job and i hope to see this update soon cause i CANT WAIT FOR night of a new dawning SO PLEASE GET THIS FINISHED SOON!
snowyleopard
Diverse Sister
2007-04-10
ch 2,
abuseHey, It's TheOtherKeyblade from khvids.

XD I found my way here and read all of "Darkness Rising" and now this. Speaking of which, I still need to go review those chappies. XD Your sense of humor kills me. Travis. Good lord, you are now my hero... :giggle: Why do I have the feeling I'm going to have to say goodbye to Travis soon? XP Another one bites the dust. And no Travis/Kairi? Aw, darnit. There goes my Crack!Shipping. xD Well well, I think this late night gig isn't my thing, I've lost what I was going to say. Mu-nuh. Hmm, I am waiting for the next chappie.
This Charade
2007-03-24
ch 2,
abuseI read Darkness Raising, which i found on an epic quest for a good Roxas/Namine that wasn't completely AU. But when I was done I was so eager to read this that I forget to review! Sorry!

You really are a great writer. In both stories the character interactions are interesting and believable. A rarity on this site sadly.

I LOVE how you explain the heart and the heart nobodies have. Great explanation. Thank you for noticing the biological impossibility of NO hearts.

Also, great job getting into Zexion and Larxene's (DR) mind. You are quite good at the manipulation aspect of the members...maybe to good... LOL

Updates soon
*Adds to Alerts* I wanna get an email soon!
Lady Keyblade
2007-03-07
ch 2, anon.
abuseZexion's alive!
MyinnerMilo
2007-02-02
ch 2,
abuseLol.. yes, still sort of confused. Hehehe...

I feel bad for Travis :(

.. Zexion is going to be in 3D? o.O
You know.. he was in KH2.. for like.. 2 seconds. In that one scene...

Well, aren't I descriptive? :D Lol ^ _ ^

Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update!!
cheeky doggie
2007-02-01
ch 2,
abuseHey again Jade! :]

You know what the stupid thing is? It's only NOW, in the second chapter, that I've realised that Zexy is, technically, still alive. It made me go "WHAT THE?! I'm a Zexy fan and I didn't catch on that he was still living until NOW?!" ==" pathetic, yes.

I'm not quite sure what goal Zexion is aiming for...but the one Travis is, at the moment, doesn't sound too promising for Riku >< Maybe I need to reread the chapter before to try understand. Hm...anyway, for my favourite line...

“Riku!” came a hiss through the door. “Riku, I’m coming in now, so if you’re doing anything embarrassing, please stop!”

“She certainly has a way with words,” Zexion remarked dryly as the door swung open and Kairi slipped into the room.

XD I applaud you for doing so well with Zexy's 'science lingo'. I would die if I was in your position. ^__^ And I love the constant updates too. They give me something to look forward to every week, specially since I have to go school again :( (and it makes me feel guilty about not updating my stories too...but psh, I love reading XD)
Mooncry
2007-01-31
ch 2,
abuseNice. The hula skirt made me laugh.
kai-frost
2007-01-31
ch 2,
abuseDon't worry, I'm not throwing rotten fruits at you, yet... Anyway, good chapter, am waiting for the next one, or I can just time warp to next week, ^-^
i AM the Random Idiot
2007-01-31
ch 2,
abuse*eyes tear up* I...I'm your HERO?...

...I thought Chuck Yeager was your hero...

As you can see, I haven't called you/answered my phone (NOT MY FAULT!), so this is indeed news.

Well, to spare anyone reading the reviews page this sordid and revealing exchange (and to that person, I blow a loud, wet raspberry. :PP-PP-PP), I'll actually type a review now.

KAMA!! *has kama-spazz*

Okay, done.
NinjaMatty
2007-01-31
ch 2,
abuseyay ! second chapter ! I'm happy =D That one was interesting. I like the one Zexion talks, even though it's sometimes hard to understand (it's not your fault >< english isn't my first language XDD) anyway XD can't wait to read more ! oh, and I'm happy to see it won't be a Travis/Kairi... XD
Riderazzo
2007-01-31
ch 2,
abuseHmm so Travis wants Riku's life. Somehow I don't think Riku will like that idea. It should be interesting to see where you take that story from here. Can't wait for the next chapter!:)
LittleBrick
2007-01-31
ch 2,
abuseha! so cool. loved the chapter. u really let yourself go with that scientific thinking XD. update soon...

peachy:P
MyinnerMilo
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseO-o-o-oh... That's cool! ^ _ ^ I'm glad you're working on a sequal and this story seems just as intriguing as DR :)

To be honest, I never got to play CoM... is that even what it's called? I played KH1 and 2 though.. Is CoM the one on the gameboy? Heh.. ((looks around innocently))

Oh and don't worry! I don't think I could just leave you and not review anymore!! ((hugs you back)) I'm too interested and I'm afraid you're stuck with me as a reviewer ^ _ ^
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