Hah! Finally found this one again, I've been looking for ages!
I really like it cause I don't think anyone else has tried to write her nightmare, and you did it so wonderfully that I can't even think of it anyway else anymore.
Good Job!

That was so emotional. We all know how Yuna feels about Tidus and I think you captured the very essence of their love. GOOD JOB!! :)

personally, I think it could have used some work. you're other works were better.

I like it because it's well written, but I think you could make it even better if you really delve into details and make it longer. For the most part, this is just the scene from the game with some insight. I know you can take this scene and make it much bigger. Anyways, Good Job (let me know if you ever decide to write an extended version; I would definately read it) ^-^

~ * ~ Rikku