I mean HHr and Harry and Hermione?
Much better then RHr and Ron and Hermione.

To my ears, at least. :]

Well, for a second HP fic written, especially nice. I like when one shots are exactly that - a brief flash of life. The narration is concise and yet conveys a huge amout of story line and emotional developement. No small feat. Kudos to you.

;__; aw. how sad.
*alls I gotta say* IS- Hermoine had better come back to the train. aww. we are two of the few harry x hermoine shippers. but that 'sokay!

anyways, this was short, but I love the connection you place between the two and the little bit of conflict you put between them with ron & stuff. & aww. poor Ron, but you've just go to love him, as a fellow red-head *smiles proudly*

this was short, but so was my entry for yours, and it just goes to show, short fics can be some of the best. Truly, it was wonderful, thank you very much kousen! thanks! argiatou!

| lunamaria & `BAI.

Very nice. I really enjoyed this. It had a more human, real feel to it, with out all the hubbub of magic. Just two kids, unsure of their feels, trying to make it through the was, threw trials, tests, and emotions. It was powerful and understated. It had a very warm tone, which I really liked.

You've got a talent.

-TC121

I'm afraid I didn't get the whole kissing Ron bit. Could you explain that to me? It seemed to come out of nowhere and with no explanation.

Thanks for writing,
Matt