yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter.

good job!i like the story line it's not something thrown out there, it's something possible you know?

Fantastic story...please continue with it it's one of the best I've read!!

yeah great story can't wait for more so please update again and soon.

Wow! I like this story. Poor Richard he always seems to die. He really is a nice fellow just doesn't fit in the world does he? Oh, well just wanted to tell you I really like your story!

cant wait for more!

Wow! this is one of the stories that you can see in your mind as you're reading it, crystal clear. Nice writing concerning action, especially the first scene of them in the park. I'm anxiously awaiting the third chapter! :)

heh no richard yay! can wait for more :P

Oh the angst! What an awesome story. I really love this start! Really got to fell sorry for Lois, her life is so completely messed up now! I liked how she discovered his secret, with all those things hidden in his boot! I suppose that's about the only place he has room to keep things in that suit :D.

Ee! This looks promising! I'd love to see more. :D

Really like this so far!! Please continue soon!


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I wasn't sure about this when I read the summary, as there have been several stories of this sort... I'm pleasantly surprised so far. Very good work. I look forward to more.