wow randomness.
but i really liked it. definetly not like every other Artemis Fowl fic. ^_^

col... kind weird but whatever 'ya know... at the first part I thought you were talking about Artemis having a daugher with Holly, Quote, "Her screams fill the hospital room, and the gnome nurses hold her hands to lend her magic, when her natural stores are used." But Artemis was disapointed and I didntr think he would be...

The second part I knew was the cloning thing and.. wait a minute.. oh! It's Opal... If this is Opal, you need to tell that in the fic and not on the extras! 'Cause then people will get confused. And then it will start to look like a cheesy fic...

if thus didn't have thy exellent writting, thus would be a cheesy fic!

Signed your fellow friend fan and writter,
Shannon

I'm confused, which doesn't happen much. I don't think Artemis would be dissapointed in a daughter, if it is his daughter. What's with the twice upon a time? I really don't get it.

M, two shiny drabbles.

The thing that bothered me is the lack of internal structure in these. There isn't any... parallelism within each drabble. The connections between the two were clear, but within themselves, there isn't that strong sense of internal tightness and structure that's so lovely in a drabble form.

Other than that, love the comparison. ;D

I love this. XD

Woman! Why are you so talented?! I loved that, twas fabulous! *can't think of an appropriate Pratchettism to go with it though*